rate_review Reviews

I completely agree with the person above me. Also, the side notes after every sentence were very distracting, and the chapter isn't anything like what the summary made it out to be. I honestly barely got through the first chapter, and am not sure if it's worth the time to read pat the chapter.

The story seems interesting, and it also seems well contructed/build. But honestly, due to the use of things like "4", or "r u"..., I did not even finish the first chapter. Maybe it makes the story easier to writte, but in my opinion, it makes it impossible to read.
So if in the future I happen on the rewritten storie, I will read it with pleasure.
Bye
M