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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi again. I'm so happy you decided to continue the story! ^^ thanks for the update. The story is progressing really well and I love how you leave a preview chapter. Its a nice touch makes people want to come back and read the rest of the story.can't wait for your next update. Keep up the good work!^_^
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what is going to happento Andrew Please!!!
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks really really interesting! I can't wait to see the rest of chapter 2 *___*
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have some interesting ideas in this and your other stories.
The formatting makes this one a little bothersome to read, and you should consider a beta, particularly for grammar. Also, your practice of posting "Review and preview" chapters to keep your stories at the top of the list without an actual update seems a bit like a bid for attention. I hope you don't intend to do this with all your stories.
The formatting makes this one a little bothersome to read, and you should consider a beta, particularly for grammar. Also, your practice of posting "Review and preview" chapters to keep your stories at the top of the list without an actual update seems a bit like a bid for attention. I hope you don't intend to do this with all your stories.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Udaten updaten please ^^ you have me hooked since the first chapter! Keep up the good work!
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it, and i want to read more XD
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, that has to be THE shortest chapter I've ever read. Even so, its a cliff hanger. Cliff hangers are EEEEVIIIILLLL!
Hurry up with chapter 3, PLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?!?!?!
Hurry up with chapter 3, PLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?!?!?!
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you really need to continue with this story.
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Makes me wanna read more. Would like to see the story continued it has a lot of potential! Keep up the good work!