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for Set Me Free

by foreverlupins

person athenaartisan
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was gut-wrenching. I loved it. Poor Andrew his heart is so broken. Poor Christan his love is torn up over another. Christan need to cool off shot,beaten and now a broken hand, he nee a thomas or jeff shaped stress ball or he will end up a bloody pulp by then end of the story. Very dramatic. i don't feel bad for josh at all selfish prick.

Great chapter can't wait for more.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story even more with each new chapter. Cliffhanger after tasty cliffhanger. i look forward to chapter 9.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Super update. I loved it and am looking forward to reading more. I also just read the note in your livejournal about your hand and possibly having to undergo surgery. I am so sorry and will say a prayer for you and hope that you get to feeling better really soon. I will understand if you can't help me out with my stories as your own stories, and most especially your health, is more important. I have to see my own doctor on Friday relating to another problem I am having with my breast (yes, lucky me I just hope that I don't need to undergo another biopsy as two were enough) so I feel and will be thinking of you and keep you in my prayers. Please just let me know so that I can find another solution. Good luck with everything and thanks for trying to help me out. ~ Misty ~
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
who is Thomas?
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update.... I loved it... I will continue to follow all your stories... thanks again for helping me out... your the greatest!... catch you later. ~~ Misty ~
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, guess who again, I forgot to ask if you were still interested in co-authoring with me. I sent an email but never received a response from you so don't know if you got it. I know you are busy with college and writing your own stories. As I mentioned in my author's panel, I seem to have lost my writer's muse yet again. In case you do want to co-author "My Beloved Fledgling", I have left "add chapter to story" enabled on it. My completed stories could use some fixing/editing up but they are not enabled until someone tells me they can help me. I recently signed up for the forum on this site to try to get another author or beta to help me along but haven't figured out yet how to post anything on it. I am not very computer illerate! Oh well, either way, your stories are awesome and I look forward to reading more of them. ~ Misty ~
person MissMiki
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woah...cold branding sound horrible!! haha as does branding in general. damn. o.o AND yeah, I guess it would be rather out of character for Christian to all of a sudden become a big teddy bear (though i think it's in him somewhere lol)
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see that your back to writing/updating your stories. What can I say?... Awesome chapter.... poor Andrew!....gasps.... branded..... ouch... that had to have hurt... At least Christian saved him from possibly something worse .... I really hate Broken Nose and hope that he gets it for what he did to Andrew.... Good luck with college... try not to get discouraged... it can be tough... but you'll get through it with hard work and determination. Never give up!

Well, until next time, Misty.
person Saminada
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh goooood!!! That update was sooooooooo GoOD! I can't believe it! >_<

And I was wondering, is Drew Christian's fist lover?? And what is Thomas to Christian?? How did they know of each other?

I can't wait to read more of this story!! :D Thanks alot! XD
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good. I like it.
....poor Andrew *sob*