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for Solution Shop: Canine Catastrophe

by AnaisWannabe

person gcpeifer
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know, it's part of your story cycle 'Solution Shop'. But I can't help...Franklin and Todd would make such an awesome couple. I'd relly like to read more about theyr relationship. Maybe, when you're in the mood to do so, you could write a sequel? Oh, and I hope that poor Duke hasn't go to the vet for, you know "snip snip".
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really really really really good, especially for a short story. wow. It was a complete story, but despite being short, the plot wasn't rushed, characters were developed, problems solved. My only wish would be for you to continue this, just to find out what happens to Todd and Franklin, but that would probably detract from the brilliant-ness of this chapter. Great job, I'll be reading more of your work.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i found this particular story of yours to be very clever. some people might miss the fact that the shop keeper actually solved the boys problems of loneliness and hopefully the dog. great read. i've read all your stories and i'm looking forward to more. they make me hot:)
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one was hilarious, though I do feel for the poor kid. Being mounted by your neighbor's dog because you trusted an old guy who sold you a suppository in a shady shop you're pretty sure wasn't there yesterday is pretty pathetic, but at least it worked out well in the end, right?