rate_review Reviews

Yay! Thanks for the new chapter! I love this story.

Poor Curtis. His whole world is caving in all at once. My heart is hurting for him. I hope his Dad will give him a break especially after he has been through all of this pain. Plus if his mother really tried to commit suicide, I am sure that Curtis wants to check on her too. I hope he will find some happiness. I hope Andy will support him.

I like the story; I remember reading in quite a while ago. I think it would read better if you changed your format; it's kind of difficult to read one long paragraph after another. Also, there are a lot of typos. You should have someone look it over before you post it. The errors take away from the greatness of the story.

Now, on to the review: I was confused in the last chapter b/c I thought Andy whispered he loved Curtis in the hospital. So, when Curtis said he loved Andy when they got home, he was so apologetic.

This is a good story; the characters are believable and the plot is good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, also, I almost forgot: I can see why Andy would have condoms b/c of Jenny, even if they didn't do anything yet. But why does he have lube???????? lol

Thanks for the update. I am sad for poor Curtis. His mom called him home so her boyfriend could beat him up. I am glad that Andy's dad is being so supportive of them. Hurray for that! I can't wait for the next chapter and the promised yumminess!

pls write more :)

I think your story is good. It has some funny moments too. I think you should continue with it. it has lots of potential. My only question is where is Andy's mother? i thought he was living with his mom and that his dad just showed up after being gone for a while.

I like it ^__^