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so good! my god, AND u put both perspectives in this chapter. I really love how emotion-driven the plot is. love it. looove. but that's just me :) although i do admit i was fully yelling at Josh throughout his segment, because honestly? accepting a rando's drink, no matter how hot the guy is, is just stupid. im a paranoid, take-care-of-others type, so i was giving motherly yells in my head to him, but i still felt for him....
and that doctor woman pissed me off.
you're very good at toying with the reader's emotions, so one feels what the characters feel *claps hands*.
and a side note, does the drug actually exist?
double side note, i totally thought Josh ended up doing cocain because of the title. threw me off, but the apprehension built up that way. greatness as usual :D

*gasp* Oh my God, poor Josh!! >.< That was really well written, by the way!! ^_^ Again, poor Josh :( I hope he's okay...

Nice story. I like how both of your charaters have their own unique personalities. I think it would be hard to write twins without making them seem too much alike; but you do it really well. Great story, very enjoyable to read. Peace.

*gasp!* And yay, you updated! ^-^ I seriously love Double Helix! ^-^ It's really, really good! Poor Josh and Victor :(

An unexpected turn, a newly brought in character, a cliff hanger... what's there not to like?
As for the Dutch - I was able to understand it without problems but know too little about the grammar to judge its quality or point out mistakes. My guess is though - if it was done by google's language tools, it makes no sense to a native speaker at all =p

Well jeez, now you've got me all bashful...but there's not way I could justify not leaving a response to that chapter. It got me all freaking out and wanting to scroll down just to make sure everything worked out. Of course, you didn't offer and consolation there, but that's just good writing. Suspense and whatnot. I love this story. I pretty much check for updates every day...which is completely unreasonable and I know it.

I just found this story today and I am enjoying it more than I thought possible. You've got a tremendous gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

yaaaay! one of the best ways to wake up, a new chapter in a funktastic story. love love love it. though theres much angsting and drama to be had (which is great) i'm also happy (or hoping) for the future happy ending....right?
so sweet! love both vic and josh! more vic than josh though. yum.

Ah, this is so exactly what I need right now. So deliciously enjoyable, light and fun and on top of that, your writing is so fresh with all those little details that keep it from being at all stagnant. Love it. Please please please post more.

It will sound like sucking up if I leave an honest review now, so I'll just... not do that.