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for Double Helix

by VicHam

person Bexy31
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor angsting boys :( I'm so glad they kissed though! ^_^ Twas really well done :) *nods* The re-writing obviously worked, ha ha. Thank you for another amazing chapter! ^_^ And please keep up the good work :)
person lilclily
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeeeeeee! love progress~
nicely done as usual....and i totally love how they compliment each other/ do a role-reversal, particularly in the calming-down scene. and don't worry, the kiss was hot....just wish there was some desperate groping to go with it, just cause i love smutty-ness :) and those sites helped out; i see you did your research on it and put it in. quite accurate.
oh, and i read your other stories (HP) and looooved it! so good! twincest is definately your thing, especially since i was totally weirded out at first by the pairing, and now i love it muahahaha.
person aki
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg poor joshie I'm so glad he;s ok.
and that kiss was awosme like 2000000000 XXXX better than what I thought it would be. and I hope you can make it throught this next week fast
Thans for the chapter and I hope the new one comes out soon.
< 3
person Rachel
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, thank you for responding to my review!=D

And this chapter definitely lived up to my expectations! It all feels so real! And they finally kissed, though seriously Vic needs to suck it up and say SOMETHING about it. I have the feeling that Josh will be the one to mention it, though.
Hopefully they'll find out what happened... hm, I wonder who did it...

I can't wait for the next chapter, but don't worry about it not coming out for a while, it's worth the wait. =D
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They kissed, yay! Lots of emotions and questions, but boyo, it's all good. Josh is a sweetie, and I love how their kiss came about, the light kisses on the face, and then, lips! kissing! yay! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen between them!
person aki
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost never read twin stories as I find them predictable and blah. But I'm so glad I read this one. Is just underful and is so well writen that it just makes me shamed for not reading it sooner. I asolutlu love it and I cna't wait for the next chapter (Hint hint XD)

I love your twins and this just made me so sad but in a good way. (sorry for making no sence)

thanx for the story again
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I love me some insest, twinsest is even better. I love storys where to people like each other, but don't know, it's fun to read their thoughts back and forth, while waiting and thinking to yourself when one of them is finally going to say or do something xD And I knew there was something wrong with that Bill-Idol guy! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really wonderful, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
person Rachel
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I have to say that this story is AMAZING. I haven't read an original fic as good as this in a while! Also, I love how Josh dyed his hair and such because he didn't want to think of his twin whenever he looked in the mirror. And I love their relationship, though of course I reallyreally wish they would get their heads out of their asses and CONFESS.

NOW. Omgomg JOSH!! X_X I hope he'll be okay gaaah!! Poor Victor, too, I can't imagine what he must be going through.

Now, 99% of the time, I absolutely LOATHE it when people add in the 'hospital' plot in their stories. I hatehatehatehate it. It's so overused and it's such an obvious way for the main characters to confess their love.
BUT. In your story... I think this is the first story where I've actually loved it!! It doesn't seem fake to me, and the turmoil Vic is going through seems REAL!
I can't wait to read more of this, it's fantastic!!
And I can't wait for the sexy parts, either... -coff-
person rulz
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again, thank you for a great read. There hasn't been one story on this site that has caught my attention and interest as quickly as yours has. Your characters are well developed, the attention you pay to detail makes it easy to become immersed in the story and feel as if I am right there seeing it all happen. I read ALOT...everything I can get my hands on. One of the best reads I can have is to forget where I'm at, what I should be doing, and resenting any interruption....lol. I KNOW I'm reading a great story when my mind goes back to it while I'm working or doing mundane household chores and wondering what new paths the story and characters will take. The bond these two brothers have is awesome. Seeing the angst they go through because of their personal feelings, trying to keep them under wraps, not wanting to let each other know because of the fear of being rejected or it being "wrong" leaves the reader wanting to alternately smack them upside the head or just yell "geez....TALK to each other!" You keep the suspense flame at high and yet still manage to give us a peek into their fears and faults and keep us cheering for them and hoping they will find each other soon.
I'm writing too much, I'm sure, but just wanted to let you know that after a 12 hour day at work, when I come home late at night, grab a soda and change into comfy clothes, the next thing I do is turn on the computer to see if there is an update on your story. THAT's a first for me, but a true statement as to how much I enjoy your writing and appreciate the lengths you go to research little details that make the story so realistic. Thank you for the most enjoyable, interesting and truly entertaining read I've had in a very long time. I look forward to more. Hope your weekend is going great!!