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OMG! What a fantastic preview! How naughty of you! Teasing us with a glimpse of Warren and leaving us with a nice little cliffie. Now I will be biting my nails wondering what will happen next to poor little Matt in the hands of that evil Vamp. I LOVED IT! I hate Jason for betraying Matt. Although, if it wasn't for him then Matt and Ezra wouldn't have been brought together. I am beginning to wonder that maybe it might be Warren and not Ezra who is killing the young men at the Doll's House.

You have caught my attention with the previews of your new stories, especially 'Dhampir Saga: Forbidden Mate' and the possible sequel to 'Innocence Broken' it sounds like a very good idea.

I had already left the add chapter to story function enabled for 'My Beloved Fledgling' so please feel free contribute to it. I think that your author name will be listed under any chapters you write so that you will get the recognition for writing them. I really would appreicate your help and expertise. If you can fix up 'MCMTML', let me know and I will enable it for that story too. I hope to have my Harry Potter story finished by the end of the month.. depending on my computer access.

I look forward to your next update. Take care and thanks, Misty.

I really like your story and can't wait until you update again. Just a word of advice, please just be more careful with your spelling. Please don't take offense
as none is intended. I just thought you would want to know there are just a few tiny mistakes that can easily be corrected. Your story is great and the characters are very believable. I am so looking forward to your new stories.

This story has obvious potential but I think the grammer is holding it back-I think a beta could help you make the story even better

Great you updated! :D

Now I wonder why Jason betrayed Matt?? He's probably just scared of the vamps!! ...What a good 'friend' he was ;; Such a shame!

Oh well, poor Matt :(

Thanks alot for the updates! I liked them *hugs*

And as for ur other stories, well I sure can't wait to read ur 'Dhampir Saga: Forbidden Mate'!! It sounds really good! XD

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.‘Dhampir Saga: Forbidden Mate’

Keep it up, I look forward to more. So he was sold out by his partner, I'm curious as to why, I'll just have to wait and see what happens.

I like it so far,keep up the good work.I'm looling forward to Dhampir Saga: Forbidden Mate.*Please* update again soon.

wow a very good start!!! please update soon!!!

If this is your first story, it's very good and has got my attention. I have already fallen in love with your characters before really getting to know them but that is because your story has me hooked. Will the pairing be mostly Matt/Ezra or threesome with Matt/Ezra/Warren? I can't wait until you introduce Warren. I was wondering though, where was Jason when Matt went into the Doll's House? Thanks for reviewing my story and adding it to your recommended reading list. I added yours to my profile too. My computer crashed again and got infected with some kind of virus so I am using my friend's PC to check stories. I haven't been able to update my stories because of it. I am in the process of looking for new PC. If you are interested, maybe you could help me with continuing "My Beloved Fledgling" and possibly help me with fixing up "My Captor, My Tormentor, My Love" so that it makes for a more interesting story. I don't have a Beta but you seem to know what you are doing. I anxiously await your next update. I will be following this story and any future ones you write. Take care.

Very interesting. Could use some gramatacle corrections but the premise and idea are good.