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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story! and i think Connors and Dariuss situation gives a new meaning to the word discussion. Only if Darius would explain his side of the raid on the village or Connor would tell why he is behaving like he is. I dont think Darius ever condemned to rape and abuse little children. but I love the story it is great! please update soon!!!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your style. The switches between submissive pet and unruly pet are a wonderful contrast. Keep up the great work.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a great story idea. Two brothers with completely different pets. I think it is great. I love Selix. He is the cutest thing ever. Mikhael is definitely going to enjoy being a pet owner.I cannot wait to read more.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please continue this story. I've been checking back daily for an update. I love the characters please update soon!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just read your story and its a winner. So many good stories too few hours.
Connor should at the moment acquiesce to be the General's pet until an opportune time for him to escape presents itself. Don't know how successful he'll be since all of his last attempts ended in recapture. But hey! Nothing beats a failure but a try. I'm rootin' for Connor because I'm always for the underdog.
Hurry up with the next chapter. *fidgets*
Connor should at the moment acquiesce to be the General's pet until an opportune time for him to escape presents itself. Don't know how successful he'll be since all of his last attempts ended in recapture. But hey! Nothing beats a failure but a try. I'm rootin' for Connor because I'm always for the underdog.
Hurry up with the next chapter. *fidgets*
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! I LOVE this story!! I also like the contrast with the two brother's pets; one is to aggressive and one is not aggressive enough. Poor Selix.
I can't wait to read what happens next. XD
I can't wait to read what happens next. XD
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start! Thanks for sharing the story. Looking forward to more.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it, you created some very different and powerful characters i aready questioning who each of them are and how you'll make them work together more it you please
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We've got another winner!! Connor is really in for a rough time isn't he? Wonder how Verperian will tame the wild boy? That means we must have more chapters doesn't it.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Looking forward to see where this is going ^-^ Poor Conner and poor Mikhael. Fu fu fu.
A tip is that you put more space in the text, the layout. It'll make it easier to read on the computer. =)
Great work!
A tip is that you put more space in the text, the layout. It'll make it easier to read on the computer. =)
Great work!