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by JetLevy

schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YIIIPPPEEE!!!! Thanks for the update.

Wonder what Daruis will find in the report. Bet it won't be good and maybe a few heads will roll.

Is Connor still going to try and runaway? Guess that will be up to Daruis' treatment of him, neh? But he has runaway from all his other owners so really this shouldn't be any different. He wants his freedom and bad. But at what cost. Connor would always be looking over his shoulder and that is no way to live. But I digress.

Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this, its really well written! Please update soon :)
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that Connor and Darius' story is getting me much more excited, but I like this idea that Selix wasn't used by his previous master. I am a little confused, though, for what that means about Darius' insistence that Connor come to his bed. Do people not fuck their pets a lot, a la Master Crus? Or was he an eccentric?
person JulesGer
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huhu,
that was fast...awesome...:)
I love the szene in which Darius teases Conner with the food, that was hilarious.
Poor Selix,i bet he feels rejected and unwanted,plus Conner gave him the shock of his life,a pet straight from hell...hihi.
I can`t wait to see Darius reaction after finishing the reports.
Hope you update soon again!
Liebe Grüße,Jules
person Avernion
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I snorted at the story Selix told. Conner must have felt like puking, laugh. It was a very fitting story to be told by Selix though. I wonder if his master will ever understand him.

I love Connor. He's so great >:3
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!! Thought you had all but abandoned this story. The updates for this story are waaaaay to long.

Now that its out of my system on with the review. Ahem.

Hope Darius has girded his loins for the battle! Connor will not allow himself to be subjugated. If Daruis is smart, he will change his strategy. Any good military officer will change his strategy if the one deployed doesn't work. But we shall see what we shall see. Let the battle begin!!

P.S.: Please, please don't take too long with chater 5. Pllllleeeeeeaaaaaaaassssse!!
person MissMiki
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my!! what an interesting story you have here! I can't wait to read more!! :O I certainly don't care for Darius' opinion of things,but Mikhail fascinates me. :) can't wait to read more!
person Avernion
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Connor. I really like this story. I'm glad its been updated :D Can't wait for more X3
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story hits so many of my kink buttons. The master who doesn't want a slave and the adoring slave is fun, of course, but the Connor-Darius tension is through the roof! Most of all I love the balance between the two stories, and I hope the parallel progression continues.
person JulesGer
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hallo,
awesome story,you had me with the first chapter!
I`m so sorry for the children, is the little girl really dead?
I can understand why Conner is fighting Darius so much,when he is the one in charge for that awful massacre...:(
Selix is such a cute thing, but it makes me sad,the way he acts,like a stupid doll.I know it`s all he knows,so it`s not his fault,surley
Mikhael will fix that soon...hehe.
And i also love Lanix, the way she yelled at Darius, serves him right,and poor sexy Conner, i suffer with him!
Hope you update soon!
Alles Liebe, Jules