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Thanks for the new chapter. The ending to this chapter really blew my mind. Selix and Conor together? Wow. You did a very good job of setting this up. It is sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. I wonder where this will leave Mikhail and Selix in their relationship. Selix has been offering himself to Mikhail for so long. I can't wait to see how this will all turn out.

Whoohooooo, I knew it! They can't break him, not like that.
Oh but dammit, that last part was so sweet.
Mind you, I'm still rooting for Conner and his master, acknowledged or not, and Mikhael seems to be coming around (albeit slowly), so all's good. I'm starting to really like Selix (finally) as he's discovering more of himself, party that aren't all trained-pet.

Great chapter.
~jea

I love this story. Selix is so adorable and innocent, but it feels as if he's completely losing hope from his master. I hope he doesn't have to fall into a horrible depression and have to resort to becoming bitter and defiant in order for his master realizes he should just give in and let the poor thing please him! Please update soon, I'm anxious to read more!!!

I love this so far. You actually thoight Conner caved. Anyway pleasd update soon.

*squeel* Great chapter!! I never thought about Connor and Selix together, but the ideas pretty hot. I wonder if they'll be caught by one of the Vesparian brothers. Oh the suspense. Can't wait for another update. awesome story

I sure didn't expect that!

Every chapter I read I love your story more and more. Great writing... I love how the two slaves' have such opposite reasons for their angst. I love that the masters are trying to be compassionate in their own ways.cpm

You know, chapter 13 actually made me want for connor and Selix to get together. Selix's master is too selfish, annoying and mean to Selix. You might not portray him that way, but the way he's acting towards selix is making me upset. : ( He doesn't let selix do anything for him, in turn making him unhappy just so he wouldn't have to deal with him. Connor's master upsets me a bit too by him wanting to have control over connor and not allowing him the freedom to just live his life.
You might not have this story end up this way, but I actually would prefer for selix and connor to end up together right now. Unless those masters of theirs change, thats who I want paired together right now.
I knew what Connor was doing was just an act : ) He wouldn't break down just like that. He always found the weaknesses and played the strategy just right before he escaped. maybe he can take selix with him.....?
looking forward to the next chapter!! ooooh i Just cannot wait!!!! ; )

(13) I feel like I need to catch up on all the reviews I never got to leave for previous chapters, which is why this may turn out a little on the long and rambly side ;)

I'm not surprised that Connor would grow to like Selix over time but it was a nice surprise that Selix could look past his training and what he thought a pet should be to change his own opinion. To see there might be something special about Connor in his own way and that he shouldn't have to change. Granted part of it could be that Connor is probably the only person Selix could relate to or have as any kind of friend despite being so different but I like the understanding that's starting between the two. It'll be interesting to see what develops between them, they're an interesting pair all on their own :)

I can't help but wonder if this is one of those situations where the master thinks he wants an obedient little pet but then when he gets that he ends up missing the unpredictability of what he was. I really can't see Darius wanting some perfect little pet especially when you saw them alone together, he liked the challenge and fight that Connor was. Of course Connor isn't really broken in anyway so maybe he's just wanting Connor to be able to pull off the pet act in public to prove that he could do it, can't wait to find out though :)

Seems everyone may be on the verge of some sort of breakthrough or breakdown (poor Selix) but I love how there's so much more than just the relationships between master and pet going on. It's going to be interesting watching all of them develop, can't wait to read more :)

Gushhhh

what a turn of events!!! C and S together?! I could have never guess!

I mean I like V! I really like it to work out somehow for C and V but C and S!!! O.o

I still can't imagine it!

I think C has his inflect on S and S is becoming like C more and more everyday! I hope then, the small V could return S's love and affection!

But what if the Vs find out about what happen between these two!!! ohhhh ...

I can't wait for the next update!

Awsome chapter! Thanks ;)