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Hello Jet Levy.

Received your review, and found no way I could reply you ( ;___; *sobs* please leave an email )
it's okay thou,

coz I think i found a read that has tickled my interest. Connor is a name I've seen before.
but definitely not in this high spirited character. Interesting guy he is, he's definitely going to make his own life, and the life of those around him, hell. for at least awhile. ^___^


Anyway. sorry for doing this, but I'll reply to your review here (since I think I ought to address the matter asap)
there is a manga that is just like this.... is this a fanfic of that manga or something you came up with on your own?
Yes, there is a manga similar to this (I do not think SR is exactly like it). The manga 'Bukiyou Na Silent' by the mangaka Takanaga Hinako was what inspired me to create the character 'Moku', and the story 'Silent Relationship'
I have stated disclaimers/credit to Takanaga Hinako at the first chapter of SR (Did ya miss it? ^_^" ) so I think that's okay? yeah?

SR is not a fanfiction. It's not even using the characters from Bukiyou Na Silent. Merely some similarities, in the sense that Moku, alike Satoru, are quiet boys. Maybe later on there will be more similarities? I dont know. I just hope my readers will recall that this story, IS, indeed, inspired by Bukiyou Na Silent.

Sorry for the rant!
Hope that helps?

Laters ;)

- nekoii

chap 2

Selix is an interesting character to match up with Vesperian. But...

Wasn't Vesperian with Connor in the previous chapter?

A bit lost here... Chapter 2 is in the past or present of chapter 1.... er ...

Absolutely gorgeous, although there are some minor spelling errors.

You have NO IDEA how much I love your story right now.
*has this wiggly feeling some stories cause* ^_______^x

Connor is awesome. And Darius, GOD I love that man. They're brilliant together.
And dammit, Clientina is a frickin cock block. ò.óx And his name sound slike a girl's name. XD

Much, MUCH love,
~jea

(15) It is just slightly off-putting how easily Connor can adapt and change but it's probably a good thing since I always suspected Darius didn't truly want an obedient simpering pet, most of this training's for public show. I was glad to see that Darius admits outright that he likes Connor's personality and that he would even say right to Connor that if he can keep up the act than they can be equals in private. They're an interesting pair, it's going to be fun to see how the relationship develops and if they can stay on good terms or at the very least not trying to kill each other ;) On a last note I'm still trying to figure out why Darius would want Connor to learn dance but I guess we'll have to wait and see :)

And I don't think there was ever much worry of Connor becoming a better pet but I can understand Selix's jealousy in regards to that, it probably feels like all he's got. I had been shocked that Clientina would be aloud to punish Selix but I realized that it wouldn't have even occurred to Mikhael that he has to make all decisions for Selix but maybe something good will come of this ^_^ Fingers crossed that this may be a turning point, it would be nice for Mikhael to realize how amazing he is and what it is that Selix truly wants from him :)

Loved these couple of chapters and extra happy we got two at once :) And I think we may have gotten a little look at things to come, I wonder if one of those towns that Mikhael was reading about was Connor's. I wonder what Connor's reaction will be when he finds that out, especially since he's spent so much time running and rebelling and here his village is going to join the Banpo. Can't wait to see how this develops, looking forward to the next updates ^_^

The Selix/Mikeal storyline is cute, and it by itself would be well worth the read.

But dammit, the Conner/Darius storyline is so amazingly, blazingly hot I find myself sort of skimming through the parts that don't have thier loveless, sadomasochistic angrysex interactions and focusing on the two of them. I'm with Darius on this- I prefer my men rough-edged and manly and I prefer my sex to be complex, fiery, and liberally sprinkled with twisted D/s and just sort of borderline consentual. Seriously: awesome. Much love. Will be watchin' this one fer updates.

Poor Selix! I wonder how things will evolve for him. And for Connor too.
Bye
M

I love this story.
So many chapters of suffering instead of a few paragraphs of pain and then happy fluffy good times like so many other authors seem to do.
<3

wow it's getting higher. Cornor is a cheeky boy. love it

Ohhh My God! Another update only in one day!!! I love you soooooo much! Kisses, hugs, ... I just love you! xoxo

Out of all of your fics, I love this one the best! I like all of them, but this one is something else! ;)

Remember I told you I don't like Selix that much? I'm taking it back! :D He is becoming very very interesting! and I don't need to say anything about Conner and D! lol I'm in love with them!

Two chapters ago, the one finishing by Conner kissing Selix, I was thinking you might want to take it that way, the two pets falling for each other but with these two updates I don't believe you want to that!

Ohhhh, I wish you could update every day! Puppy eyes! lol It's really hard to wait for 1-2 months to read the rest!

But my God, the story is getting so nice, so interesting, and overwhelming!

can't wait for another update ^_^

Love U ;)