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for The Fine Line

by THEleprechaun

person Cat
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Only four reviews? That has to be a sin!
This is a very good story so far with many interesting and lively characters! ^-^
I really hope you keep at it, though! Every time I start to like a story the author dies on me. >-<
But yeah, I love your plot and characters so far; they are very fun to read.

Keep up the wonderful work!
person me
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! this is really, really good.
i love your characters and the storyline is very intriguing.
please keep updating (:
person Luvdonite
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. is aaron secretly in love with vincent?
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o man this is an interesting plot! keep up the awesome job!!!
person DJfrdrck
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its good looks like it going some where. So please continue and keep up the good work