rate_review Reviews

I like the story and I'm interested to read more, but you do have a bunch of typos you might want to fix.

Maybe you should get someone to beta your work. Just read over it and correct typos. Anyway I think its great, I def like Skylar he's funny. And I loved the application form..size. Every girl should have an application form for a guy and then check if he's lieing.

Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter, because you left it as a cliffy and that's mean. You know that's really really mean. Anyway I love the build up, its really exciting.

Hugs Aduial