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i think u should jsut have sky go completely off the wall an have him be in a threesom with Bradley and Troy. an have it be some hot steamy sex turn love making an some how have where sky realy starts doting him self for realy an staarting thinking about it not being a bad idea to be gay or at least not bad to have feeling for those two.

I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORIES. I read the Lion and the Lamb as well. I just think that you are an amazing writer. You have by far the hottest sex scenes that I have ever read on this site. I can't wait to see how Sky develops in this story. Keep up the great work.

<3 B

aw this story is really good so far, please continue!!

I already told you its lovely my dear, but here you have a review as well.

Thanks for adding the warning. You still really need to get a beta. Your spelling is awful. Sorry to be so blunt but if I (who is far from fluent in English) can find loads of spelling and other mistakes it means it has to be really bad.

I still believe that there is potential in this story.

still love your story, but am not capable of a long review today. Take care. A

Hey, sorry to bother you without a review, but I thought you'd left your e-mail adress last chapter to get in contact with you for reading over your work (since people are still complaining I read through your reviews). Anyway if you want someone to just read over your story and spell check it then write me an e-mail to

Jet_fire@hotmail.com

I dont mind it anymore so much though, cause at least your story is really good. Hugs Aduial

Hey, I know it gets annoying people always commenting on spelling and stuff. If you want I'll read over it for you...not promising I'm like the most amazing speller in the world but its def adequate. My e-mail is on my author profile if you want it.

Anyway back to your story. Its good. Though I didn't like that bit about his girlfriend (unnecessary creepy sex scene). Hope you're gonna get rid of her soon. I love your style though, it rocks. I wish I could write in first person point of view, but I can't, just not possible. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work, and dont worry if the story is good, which yours is, the spelling isn't that important...seeing as most people can figure out what you mean.

Hugs Aduial

Get a beta and add a warning for the M/F stuff.

The story has potential :)

Hello!! This's the first time for me to review to you. I like your story and because of this just the beginning and can't say for more detail but the first chapter is interesting. And I would like to know what's happen with the Skyler later? Hope he will get the good hint ^^.