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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im really really enjoying this story!! ive been meaning to review for a while but i never really got round to it...sorry. but i was determined to do it this time lol.
hope you write more chapters soon!! x
bye bye
hope you write more chapters soon!! x
bye bye
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
KEEP IT GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KEEP IT GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was that the last chapter? Pleaseeeee don't let it be the last one. I need more of Psymon/Skylar loveeeee. This story is FANTASTIC! At first, i was rooting for Bradley/Skylar. But after you introduced Psymon's past, i fell in love with him. KYAAAA anyway GREAT JOB.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that took a diferent turn of avents then i expected, i liked it but it seem like thats the end or close to it (sniff sniff) thanks 4 the update and hoping theres still another chapter or another story
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am delurking myself. I could see this coming I was like yeah these two at some point will get together. Gotta say I love S&M stuff. Keep that one up.
It's sweet since under all that badass atiitude Psymon is actually a sweetheart. ^^ This chapter was all Fuzzy and warm but I have one complaint did Sky have to act like a girl with the whole ice cream and watching tv episode? LOL!
Anyways nice story so far! ^_^
It's sweet since under all that badass atiitude Psymon is actually a sweetheart. ^^ This chapter was all Fuzzy and warm but I have one complaint did Sky have to act like a girl with the whole ice cream and watching tv episode? LOL!
Anyways nice story so far! ^_^
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just reading all ur chapter in a row...NICE! keep me occupied for few hours! I know ur story from kiix recommendation. Anyway, aside from the good plot, i would like to add that i dun feel the angsty much from Sky. Sky despair is too short that i think a bit weird that he suddenly want to be tortured by Psymon. Maybe u should add the despair scene more to make it better than already is ;)
I'm also curious how Sky parents haven't found out about the abuse since it involved cop, etc.
Will watch ur work. Please update soon.
Ri
I'm also curious how Sky parents haven't found out about the abuse since it involved cop, etc.
Will watch ur work. Please update soon.
Ri
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is eeeeeeeeee. It is sad that there are such horrible things going out in the real world because someone is not the right sexual orientation, the wrong skin tone, hell, even not being the covergirl model type. Sky lost more than just baseball. A court win and support of loving friends will never make up for the fear that will always linger no matter how hard someone denies that it's there.
You made me cringe but I had to read to the end of the chapter. Good Work.
Kiix
You made me cringe but I had to read to the end of the chapter. Good Work.
Kiix
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update ^^ Keep it up :)
Here's the link to Skylar. Hope it's to your liking. :) My friend and I are planning to draw other characters of yours later
http://kadoku.deviantart.com/art/Chapter-12-Skylar-107018774
Here's the link to Skylar. Hope it's to your liking. :) My friend and I are planning to draw other characters of yours later
http://kadoku.deviantart.com/art/Chapter-12-Skylar-107018774
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor Sky, that's horrible what happened to him!! Though I'm so happy that all of Ace's came to see him, it shows how much they all care for him and how they are his family! And I still adore Troy and Brad, as a couple, and just as characters, and how they are so close to Sky. Ohh, can't wait for more. Happy Holidays!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, more chapters! I'm so glad everything worked out with Sky, him living with Brad and Troy, it's awesome. And now with no girlfriend, he can be himself and work happily at the bar with no secrets and fuck whoever he wants! Ewww at the old-sweaty icky cock attached to the principal, but work is work, at least he enjoyed his teacher. Can't wait for more, delicious!