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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope that thats not the end. cause thats how it kind of sounds but if not yay!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have me in tears,
OMG!
So much drama!
Psymon come back!
All the love is slowly fading.
:(
Good news please!
OMG!
So much drama!
Psymon come back!
All the love is slowly fading.
:(
Good news please!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That's... That's horrible!
I dont' want Sky to be alone. I want him to be with Psymon. But if he can't find him, can he be with Chad? Maybe? I don't think the poor dear should be alone...
I dont' want Sky to be alone. I want him to be with Psymon. But if he can't find him, can he be with Chad? Maybe? I don't think the poor dear should be alone...
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohgod, I pratically -sobbed- over this last chapter! I was like, PSYMONNOOOOO!! Gah, I feel so bad for Sky, and I'm like love/hate at Psy. I know he meant well, but he is hurting Sky so much. I want things to work out so so so bad. I loved how the whole chapter went; awesome as always! Keep it comin', please!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story a week back, and I love it. The story has so many twists and turns, and they are all realistic. I can definitely picture myself reading this one over and over again, as I've already been doing. No matter how many times I read it, I still enjoy it.
I may not be the best person to be a beta, as I've never done it, but I can try. I'm hoping that by being a beta for some of the good writers here like you, I'll become better in my own writing. My e-mail is kuro_kotsu@yahoo.com. Just drop me a message if ya need help, I guess.
From, Kuro
I may not be the best person to be a beta, as I've never done it, but I can try. I'm hoping that by being a beta for some of the good writers here like you, I'll become better in my own writing. My e-mail is kuro_kotsu@yahoo.com. Just drop me a message if ya need help, I guess.
From, Kuro
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BRADLEYYYYYYYY!!!!!!
I will miss him so. (one of my fave charcters)*sniff* T_T *will continure to read though ^^.
I will miss him so. (one of my fave charcters)*sniff* T_T *will continure to read though ^^.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you killed bradley...
and troy oh god poor troy haveing to find him dead,and they were soulmates and i...just... oh my god
blubbering all over my keyboard
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and troy oh god poor troy haveing to find him dead,and they were soulmates and i...just... oh my god
blubbering all over my keyboard
s
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should really get a beta, first it's bastard not bastered, second it's break, not brake, and third it's impossible for Troy to pull Sky against his "naked" chest when Troy does the pulling as Sky's "about" to pull off his shirt. Just a few of the things that I noticed from this chapter(22). Anywho, I do like your story (although I feel it's a little fast paced), but I really do believe that it would benefit from having a beta look it over.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this story from the start. Psymon is just to die for!
However, I was a bit surprised with the last chapter. I'm sure you know that one doesn't really get AIDS through kissing or even oral sex. In addition the tough regiment of drugs is not that difficult in the first couple of years of the disease. Today people can live say 20 years post-diagnosis if they keep on track with their drugs. You probably know most of this, and just wanted to kill Bradley for plot effects. But I think that there are so many AIDs stereotypes (often wrong)attached to gay people that I feel bad reading this even in fiction.
I hope you find a beta soon ;)
However, I was a bit surprised with the last chapter. I'm sure you know that one doesn't really get AIDS through kissing or even oral sex. In addition the tough regiment of drugs is not that difficult in the first couple of years of the disease. Today people can live say 20 years post-diagnosis if they keep on track with their drugs. You probably know most of this, and just wanted to kill Bradley for plot effects. But I think that there are so many AIDs stereotypes (often wrong)attached to gay people that I feel bad reading this even in fiction.
I hope you find a beta soon ;)
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Bradley :( Well, now one of my friends is going to be depressed.
About the beta, my friend and I can beta read it for you, we're sharing an account. She's been correcting some mistakes since the first chapter and really loves your stories (me too xP) Her e-mail is mdogyoukaim@yahoo.com and mine's kathrynw93@yahoo.com
About the beta, my friend and I can beta read it for you, we're sharing an account. She's been correcting some mistakes since the first chapter and really loves your stories (me too xP) Her e-mail is mdogyoukaim@yahoo.com and mine's kathrynw93@yahoo.com