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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! Nasty cliffy angain!!!! Who the hell is Willow?? One of the lost children?? Does Akira know about the city beeing in danger?? Is he ready to fight?? And what willbecome of Rune without "Fear" to help him??? I'm so exited!! And hope you really update asap!!! I can't wait see you then!!!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohw is his other personality dead? And it seems Rune does know it!! So sad I liked hIm really much!! Is he dead cause he used this trance thing?? And WHat the helll really happend?? Was Zack shot or not?? Rune wasn't shot right?And What is this about awakening the animal in them?? Does this have the same effect on bothof them?? Well I must say this chappie was fantastic but really confiusing!! I really don't get it!!! I hope you will explain things in the next chappies!!! See you soon!!! And thanks for the update!!!
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the double update!!! But who the hell is "in"??? I can't wait to see but I guess it doesn't mean anything good which means it gets exiting and dangerous!!! Yay!! Hope keir will protect rune!!! Hope you update asap!!! See you next chappie!!!
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naw nasty cliffhanger!! It got so exiting!!!! I really like Runs other personality!!! I can't wait for the next update!! It's so fucking awsome!!! Please update asap!!! See you next chappie!!!
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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow fantastic!! What the hell is going on with rune??? Thats so freaky!!! I love it!! Hope you update soon can't wait to see what Zee tells Keir!!!
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! Rune is so innocent!! Passing out from orgasm soo sweet!!! But poor Keir again he has to wait!!! I hope they will finally get it in the next chappies!!! See you soon!!!
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well im glad your trying to get better. i hope i didn't sound mean. i wasn't trying to be. it's just that people will sometimes stop reading a story because of things like that. i'm sure you'll get alot more readers if the story was fixed up a little.
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Super!!! Akira can look in to the future!!! Thats so great!!! >Too bad that we don't get to see from Akira and Zev for a while but but we also have to know what is going on with Keir, Rune, Ransom and Marinella (I hope I wrote their names right)!!! I really love that you update so frequently!! Hope to see you next chappie!!!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
By the way that you write i thought that english may not be your first language. you have really good ideas and you write well, you just need a beta who can fix your grammar problems. i love the story so far though.
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great!! I really like this!!! Hope he learns to control his gift!!! See you next chappie!! And who the hell put the image in his mind?? I really want to know!!!