rate_review Reviews

I love thick books. so for me 40 chapters is not too much :-)

You are the author you choose how long the book should be! Viperbites has a story or 12 on here that is up to 98 chapters long. As long as you write we'll read. Don't sweat the small stuff!

Well I kind of guessed that about Mitch!!! I really want to see the whole story!!! And yoiu updated desert world!!! *yippy* But I have to read the whole story again cause it's been so long!!! So It might take a few days till my review on Desert world!!! See you next week!!!

Great thanks for the update!!!! It really expains a lot of things!!!! Really interesting altough it raises a few new questions!!! Hope they will be answert soon!!! See you next week!!!

Thanks for the double update!!!!! I really loved the scene in the council as Zev had to calm Akira!!!!! That was so great!!!! Now he is so trained that he can even hear the thoughts when he is not touching them!!! I love his abilities!!! And the table!!!! Telekinesis right???? I'm so happy that he finally woke up!!!! And I really like the head wolf!!! She is so nice and at the sametime strict like a real mother figure!!!!!I want to know what is in the vial that she gave Akira!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! And of cause I want to know more about Jetts past you just left off there with only hints!!! Thats so mean!!!! Well I hope we will see much more in the next chappie!!!!! See you!!!!

Absoloutly wonderfull!! I really hope Akira is going to be ok!! Whats with him and the strange dreams of his mother when he has a near death experiance?? I really hope that will be explained at one point!! And who put the pictue in his head, wayback, to control his mindreading abilitys?? Maybe I overread it? Cause you said you would explain!!! Hope to see you soon!!! Thanks for the double update!!!

Thankss for the update!! this one wasn't confiusing and it explainte a lot thank you!!! It's so exiting!! I really hope Keir is alright!! Am I right to asume that he needs blood?? I really hope so!!! See you next chappie and pleas don't let us wait too long!!!

Well this chappie is again quite confiusing!!!! With all the perspective changes, you really had to think hard to keep track with whom you are at the moment!!! It would be much more easy if you could put something like 'Akiras POV' in front of the paragraphs!!! Anyways thank you for the update and the exciting new chappie!!! See you soon!!!

thank you for update

Ahhhhh!! You and your cliffhangers!!!! I really hope you get the next up soon!! Did Akira have a vison on the cliff??? I rally hope he doesn't get killed!! I also hope everybody else is ok!!! Hope we will get to the big problems in the next chappie!!!See you soon!!!