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God I love this story it is so cool and the fact that hopefully Akira is pregnant is so exciting thank you so much and please please please update real soon I can't wait to see his and Zev's reactions and everyone elses.

can´t wait for more
great upload

Aw again such a nasty cliffy!!!! It's not fair to stop here!! But thanky for the 3 chappies anyway!!! I can't wait to see what this mark means!!! I really liked this chappie!!!! But I want more!!!! Please don't leave us just here!! Desert world can wait a bit!!!!! I really hope to see you soon!!!!!

I have been reading fictions on this site for awhile now and love it but your story and some others finally convinced me to join I truly am enjoying your story it is amazing. I love the interation of all the characters and it is so unusual and fascinating. I love the couple of Zev and Akira it's so amazing how strong and stubborn they both are and yet so loving and sweet. Akira is an amazing character and I can't wait to read more I hope you make him Mpeg soon that would be so exciting and fascinating especially how the two of them react to it and how everyone else does to. As far as them always having problems it kind of comes from who they are and what their responsibilities are and as to the one who said that thing about what fate has in store I can't wait I am so excited. I come on here every few days just to see if you have updated or not. Thank you for keeping me so interested. I also love the bit about the white wing and black wing and Akira's past oh pretty please update soon.

Wow that was a wonderful chappie!!!! What's wrong with Akira is he in heat or something??? Is that zev in the end?? Will they get problems cause its a fullmoon night??? Can't wait for more!!!!! See you!!!!

thank you for upload

Well that was all very confiusing!!!! Hope you will explain everything in the next chappie!!!!! I can't wait for your next update!!! See you!!!!!!

Wow that was great thank you for the update!!!! I really want to know more of Akiras past!!!! See you next chappie!!!!

I say keep on going! I like the story and while Pure Life is long, it's not even close to the 100 plus chapter stories I've seen here at AFF. Keep up the good work.

i really don't think a book can be too long!!!! Just continue cause copping it in half doesn't make a difference!!! I mean one book or two it doesn't matter it is the same story anyway!!! And it's not like this book will get too heavy to lift at some point ;) so just continue!!!! Anyway I waiting for the next chappie!!!! see you soon!!!!