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for Pure Life

by shadelostwolf

person smint45
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so wonderful!!! Thank you for the update!!! I really love this story!!! I hope to see you soon and I hope Akira will be alright!!!! Happy Thanksgiving !!!
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god how I have missed this story but you keep hanging me with the ends of the updates by your little cliff hangers they are killing me slowly although it keeps me checking everyday for any more updates thank you thank you thank you for finally updating and now I'll be counting the time till the next update to find out what happens god I love Akira and Zev they are so awesome and little Justin and Mace absolutely adorable gotta say Justin is so like Zev very protective and Mace is just such a sweet heart broke my heart about his mama though your characters go through such anguish one of the reasons I'm hooked though gotta admit it. Well just to let you know that I am waiting and anticipating good luck in your move done that myself way more than enough times I'll tell ya hope you have help for it.
person smint45
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the link jay the will be pat two of both you wonderfull storys!!! I can't wait!!! See you soon!!!
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love this story every time you just real me in with the mystery and wonderment and I so love Akira and Zev they are soooo cute I could just hug them silly but I do hope Akira can handle this pregnancy just because someone can battle and fight physically doesn't mean they have a lot of fortitude internally and I can't wait to see what happens next god him and Zev are going to be such good parents you can tell just by how they treat others kids and sweet little Mace ohhhh how sweet although it does make me wonder why so many adults who know what his mother does to him lets him go see her knowing what will happen just cause she's crazy doesn't mean you put a child in danger I understand his need to see her but someone should always go with him to keep her under control or at the very least get the kid out of there before he gets hurt you would think someone would figure that out before she ends up killing the kid I think Akira should step up and help this child out he's the perfect one especially since he was abused as well being one of the missing and he protected all the others as well so he should be able to handle the nutty women right. I was wondering what happened to Daisuke I was worried I mean he is Akira's only family and he does seem to worry and love the kid so I would think knowing that Akira was having his grandson and knowing all the consequences and craziness that he would want to be more on hand for his son especially since he missed out on so much of his life. Besides Akira is the only real link that he has to his beloved dead wife personally I would think he wouldn't want to let him to far out of his sight I know if I had those circumstances I wouldn't. I love how Akira pointed out all the wonderful things about Zev that would make him a great leader and only Akira could point it out so Zev would actually listen god I love those two. Can't wait till Rune and Kai enter the equation little Rune would be great for Mace the two of them are alot alike and maybe Rune could help pull little Mace out of his shell also for Reward and Akira's sister to come I can imagine how protective and a little oh wait did I say a little I mean alot bossy she would get with Akira and he needs someone who's gonna sit on him and make him behave for this pregnancy and she is just the right little sister to do it to. She'd make sure that he had a healthy kid or two and that he takes care of himself one way or another and if she has to make Zev behave and get Akira to behave she can do that. And Reward would be great for Mace to between Akira, Rune and Reward I'm sure the three of them could bring Mace out of his shell and actually start to enjoy life again poor little sweet heart. I have to admit I love lavana she is so awesome and I hope we get to see more of her she seems like one sweet tough old lady and her and Akira's sister I'm sure may clash a little because their so alike but would also make a formidable team as well hell along with Zev's mom and everyone would be eating their veggies and going to bed on time I'm sure and man I could just see the three of them keeping poor Akira in line especially if someone is in trouble and he is forced to let someone else handle it boy that wouldn't sit well with him but they I'm sure could make him stay out of it one way or another even if the three of them had to tie him up and sit and glare at him until the trouble is solved ha ha I can just see that in my head god that would be a scene I would love to see.
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay in case you don't see it on Deviant art I voted for Bloody moon that sounds verrrrrrrrry interesting and with your imagination I am sure that it would come out super fantastic. Can't wait for the next update on pure life. Oh I forgot last time but thank you thank you thank you.
person smint45
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great and again we get a cliffy!!! I really hope Akira is alright!!!! Everything is really confiusing!!! I really don't get what Disuke and Levanna and the others talked about but that happens a lot in this story and later on everything is explained so I will wait patiently!!! Hope to see you soon cause this cliffy is killing me again!!! See you!!
person smint45
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I dumb or something but wich gallery do you mean were we find the summerys to vote over??? Sorry I know I'm a bit stupid but well can't help it!!
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok i've been reading this for days now and i really like it. my favorite character is rune hes just so cute. but yeah i hope you update soon i'm really enjoying your story
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay up dates ^-^

Sorry, that's all I've got to say...I thought you deserved a review, but my own story took all my creativity out of me. Not to mention lack of sleep x.x
person smint45
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!! Nice little smutt with rune and Keir!!! I really want to know what happend that Akira doesn't remember!!! I really don't get this snippletts!!! But it will probably explain itself later on!!! Thanks for the update!!! See you soon!!!!