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oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh I loved it, it sounded soooo nice and typical of a family. I would have loved a lemon though but really I am most assuredly not complaining I mean I could never complain about such an awesome story. I'm meeting with my friends later today and we're going to talk about the story at it's whole god that has been such a hoot and I was instructed via phone this am to tell you thank you for giving us such an awesome story that we could all enjoy oh and make sure you keep writing because with your imagination and style you can't let a gift like that go to waste. Grant you I have never taken this long to read a story but then again usually the story's I read are already finished that is until I found this site now there are a few others that I have as yet to finish but I will as soon as the writers get to the end like you have. Well anyway thanks again and oh by the way who is the guy with the yellow eyes? and if you write a continuation or sequile sorry forgot how to spell could you email me or let me know somehow I would feel lower than low if I couln't read it. Thanks for the fun, laughs, tears, ect. ect. ect. It and you have been awesome.

God I love this story that was so totally amazing the last few chapters have all been amazing but to finally explain where most of this comes from who knew it would be all down to Akira's daddy wow and his mom sounds lovely I'm thrilled yet sad that the ending is coming I feel like I have been waiting forever to get to this point and find out everything I can't thank you enough for writing it. It has been a thrill reading it and becoming entranced with these wonderful characters I can't wait to read the last chapter I know I'll probably reread the whole thing once it's totally complete in fact I know I will. Thank you thank you thank you you totally rock.

That chapter was awesome and zero sounds so sweet and adorable just like Akira but without the anger just the angst. Zev is hilarious like he doesn't know what the heck to do with himself can't wait to read about him and Akira when they get together with their babies that should be so awwwwwwesome. I kept having to go back and reread about some of the characters but that's okay it's an awesome enough story to reread over and over again. I'm wondering how Daisuke and Akira are going to possibly get out of this crazy mess that they are in and I almost felt sorry for Diter I mean I think everything is that monster Cearlean or what ever his name is fault and that he just used and manipulated everyone the creep and I can't wait to see him brought down maybe Zev could rip out his throat and Akira could cut up his jewels if you know what I mean before Zev rips out his throat. Or maybe his wife could cut up his jewels that would be fitting for screwing everything up. Most important Daisuke should get his in as well maybe he could rip out the creeps heart like the creep did to him when he stole his poor babies from him can't remember what happened to Ellen but he probably killed her to. I love what Rainer said absolutely priceless with a little bit of a jealous Zev how funny is that thank you so much for writing and I can't wait for more and the ending it should be awesome cause you are an awesome writer.

great chapter :)

I loved both of the chapters soooo interesting I love the fighting scenes and the fact that Daisuke is so involved I kinda miss Akira fighting but not to easy in his condition and very dangerous so I am so thrilled everyone is protecting him and everyone else and it is awesome to finally meet both the kids fathers very cool. And Zev kicking some but that was also awesome although I felt sorry for the poor tainted one to have blindness forced on it god that is just so wrong. I love Damian's mom talk about cool can't stand his dad though. Exactly what kind of job does Daisuke do anyway well anyway thank you I for one has missed the updates sorely. Can't wait to find out about this second child of Daisukes and for Akira to give birth should be interesting on how you do it. Thank you again hope all is going better for you.

Well I tried to review earlier but it didn't go through hopefully this one will god I so love Akira and Zev they are so totally awesome and since Akira is in his 2nd trimester I wonder if he'll get all lovey and dovey and horny all the time like most of my female friends do when they were pregnant it was a little nerve wracking watching them get that way with their husbands and boyfriends but I can't wait to read it with my two favorite guys especially with Akira's personality and I can imagine how much Zev would love it considering he's the one who is so showy about his love for Akira talk about it being so funny. I found Justin's change written very well and it was so adorable and I can't wait to see Mace's reactions to it. And Daisuke asking Akira if he can be a part of his and Zev and the baby(s) lives in his own way very wonderfully done and so with both of their personalities thank you for always being so consistant with it. I do wish you had put a little more in with Zev's parents and how gushy I'm sure they would be especially his mom who adores Akira so cool.

That was a great chappie!!! I totally forgot that Akira still didn't know that Mitch belongs to his family!!! Really great!!! Hope to see you soon!!! And I wish you succsess in finding a Job!!!

looove it sometimes a little hard to follow but still loved it. zero sounds interesting so does daemon and lord knows I love akira and zev although I found it kind of hard that it was so hard to bring down the mad women with how strong Akira is but I guess with the pregnancy taking his strength and the wound in his wings and maybe even trying not to kill the nut he did have limited choices. It was kind of weird though it took Zev so long to find him. I do like Justin he is a real character and quite the little hero talk about sweet the whole bit about Mace's dad and Justin's dad is kind of confusing but I'm sure you in your ultimate imagination will clear it up for me. I do hope Zev doesn't let Akira to far out of his sight until at least the baby or babies (hint hint) are born I'm worried about him god is that ever silly but oh well I can be a bit crazy over great stories. Review me though exactly how far along is Akira and when are the little one(s) due tiny bit of confused there maybe I'll reread it like the zillionth time and see if I can figure it out. Almost feel sorry for Star she has to keep an eye out for all these rambunctious boys and men that trouble seems to seek out while trying to make sure they don't get killed or kill themselves I wish the healer would stick around and help her she's really kind of neat to. Well gotta go thank you thank you thank you for the update and I'll be checking as often as I can for the next one with anticipated breath geez if you don't finish it soon I may pass out.

That was so great!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!

I love his story its captivating encouraging me to read more, though I usually read shorter fics update soon.