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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*LOL!* this was a great start, seems like a really fun story to read! I'm gonna keep my eyes open for the next chap!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm totaly with you on thi sone.
i mean, once you get them all hot and bothered they always notice too late..
or are to far gone to care.
besides didn't kingsley establish that all males are gay(in some part of a percentage)
i swear their main argument is ' it isn't normal'
menaing if they are led into a situation where it is normal they do it.
jail isn't the only option either.
anyway i'm still under the impression of colin firth kissing that guy in mamma mia.
what mor ecan a girl ask.
i mean i've got mr.darcy ,my wet dream, doing excatly what he does in all my wet dreams- kissing another guy)
i was liek totaly 'look sis they're so getting it on, can't you feel the vibes?' like i do with e.v.e.r.y film specialy the ones that hold not even a g of gay in their plot or charachters
and she was laughing and here comes her usual reply A(when she likes the movie):'cut it out fireball, this is not that kind of amovie and B(WHICH NEVER HAPPENED BEFORE):'oh,my God!i can't belive this!!yuck'
yuck?!
yumm is more like it*lol*
anway i like the begging of the chapter and the end.
congrats, this is a good story so far.
you've got to watch amma mia , i so laughed my pants off.
i mean, once you get them all hot and bothered they always notice too late..
or are to far gone to care.
besides didn't kingsley establish that all males are gay(in some part of a percentage)
i swear their main argument is ' it isn't normal'
menaing if they are led into a situation where it is normal they do it.
jail isn't the only option either.
anyway i'm still under the impression of colin firth kissing that guy in mamma mia.
what mor ecan a girl ask.
i mean i've got mr.darcy ,my wet dream, doing excatly what he does in all my wet dreams- kissing another guy)
i was liek totaly 'look sis they're so getting it on, can't you feel the vibes?' like i do with e.v.e.r.y film specialy the ones that hold not even a g of gay in their plot or charachters
and she was laughing and here comes her usual reply A(when she likes the movie):'cut it out fireball, this is not that kind of amovie and B(WHICH NEVER HAPPENED BEFORE):'oh,my God!i can't belive this!!yuck'
yuck?!
yumm is more like it*lol*
anway i like the begging of the chapter and the end.
congrats, this is a good story so far.
you've got to watch amma mia , i so laughed my pants off.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... this is new... the main character who is straight, was desperate enough to come up with such a plan LOL.... can't wait for more...
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi...The tone is well set and I am eargerly waiting for the next chapter...
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay that caught my attention. Very I funny authors note by the ways.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:3 I don't just like it, I love it 8D Cody is a hilarious character that I would appreciate to not be bothering me with his bastardness, but still a hilarious guy. I just cleaned my room, and I swear it's been decent this whole time. I mean, I haven't found any LARGE living creatures in there yet >.> Ah, the Dude eh? Yes, I've also heard his 3fer deal is a bargain. 8 bucks + the tater tots from the cafeteria? DEAL! lol, Brighton is a fuckin' awesome name fro a mafia connected badass.
hah, I'm having so much fun interacting. I love a good firstPOV story. Thanks for writing so far and I hope to see more craziness soon~
hah, I'm having so much fun interacting. I love a good firstPOV story. Thanks for writing so far and I hope to see more craziness soon~
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wanna read more, I'm hooked! *-*