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this is bloddy well brillient! I can't wait till the next chapter! haha ^^

love this
Love the set up, love the protagonist, love the sexiness at the begining
please write more?

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

hmmm the name caught me off gaurd but im wowed by this story so far and on edge for more

Oh damn. It ended just when I was leaning precariously over the edge and I fell off the cliffhanger. I'm very intrigued. I can't wait to see more of this, especially the bully's reaction. Goddamn I loves me some mafia boys. And our main character's thought process is hilarious. Can't wait to see more.

Hi. ^^

Great story, can't wait for the next chapter.

“Why the hell was I fighting this again?

Oh, yeah. Because he thinks I am a girl.

Heh.”

Rofl, omg, that’s so golden. Haha, 'way to make a hook *bows at your amazing power* I read your title and was like “Bad Boy Boogie? Really now?” Then I kept reading your summary and you had me at snogging. And blackmailing someone in the mafia only ranking somewhere in the top three of stupidest things? That’s just hilarious, not to mention that it really gives us an idea of Cody’s personality before we ever even open the story. *insert random stupid accent here* Golden, pure golden!

Anyways, my idiocy besides, I love your story :] I really can’t wait until you upload more chapters. I usually don’t start stories until they have at least 5chs or so, but this was just too amazing to pass up.

Oh, I just have one helpful note to add:

In your sentence “Accept he wasn’t coming round to my way of thinking,” accept should be except and round should either be ‘round or around…sorry, I’m a bit of a Grammar Nazi…no offense meant…erk…

Anywho, please update soon! I can’t wait for the next instalment of *cue dramatic music* BAD BOY BOOGIE!!! Actually, if you could, would you please e-mail me when you do update this story? My e-mail’s keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com.

Thanks bunches!!
~Miranda

Interesting, haven't seen very good original fics in a while. This one though sounds very promising. The plot's very original too so I'm happy about that. Can't wait to read more, so hurry up and up date for me love! There will be free cheetos!

Lady, you've just made my day. I'm almost afraid to let my hopes get up again because 99.9% of everything in the original section is complete and utter shit crapped out by horny pre-teens, so to see this? I *___*'d. Like, a lot. High school fics are nothing new. Strange main characters and stranger love interests are a given. So it wasn't the originality that made me like this, just the fact that goddamnit, you can write.

That's it. I know, not the most flattering thing to hear after that much of a build up, but honest to god, I have become so desensitized to reading things that lack the sort of writing concepts you learn in freaking third grade, just the fact that you know how to use capitalization, punctuation and spellcheck is a GODSEND. So. Thank you for knowing how to write.

Now. For the story itself: the thing I love most about slash is conflict. There is, obviously, a much greater acceptance for gay relationships nowadays, but the conflict between two boys in love and society will never really go away. And added to that conflict between two very different individuals in a situation that is far from ideal... well, you have some pretty nice drama a brewin' here. And the narrator's voice is fluid and amusing to read, so that drama is coupled with a healthy dose of humor and sarcasm, which makes it a real pleasure. You don't know how much I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this little gem.

Impatient for updates, ;)

Ella

okay just to say hi. lol. no i do like it. Sounds like it turn into real fun. And i mean, ,there's plenty of people who have that faulty switch, my brother for instance. I think its not only faulty, but completely buggered.

Can't wait to read more. Aduial