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for Bad Boy Boogie

by FoxtrotUniformCharlieKilo

person Seneschal
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha! The hairbrush was just...so...perfect. And so Cody. I love it. Cody is so effing adorable, and Brighton (wow, what a strange name...if he wasn't so badass, chickens and children might have teased him for it, but I suppose the children would have gotten the shit beat outta them, and the chickens...ahem. Well.) is fantastically awesome. His fight was wonderful, but then...he WAS fighting a guy named Ashley. I mean...c'mon. What a pansy name.

In any case! Chloe is great. XDD Slapping the stupid out of him had me grinning, and it'll be what I use next time I wanna smack my brother for being a douche. >8D

I love this. It's fantastic. *adds it to favorites and rates!*
Cheers!
Seneschal
person Civako
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning of a story, I really enjoy reading it. Thanx!
person Melissa
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your style of writing very much, I like your topic, and I adore the cutie main character. Bravo, update soon please and thankyou.
person oo
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep the chapters comin.
its gettin interesting.
person ariesgirl
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh
i really really REALLY like this
super glad that you updated
i'd love to read more
also, i adore Cody, he's so awesome
person kal
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds good looking forward to more
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was good and funny too.
person miles
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! It's you ! HNA ! I recognized your writing !
All your stories are so good ! This one too ! Can't wait for the next chapter !
By the way, welcome back !!
person HannaFO
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So awesome!
I really like the way u write, so humorous :)
person fmadiva
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please write more this story is really interesting so far!