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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A really good and hot story. Can't wait until the next chapter.
It seems as if Seth really would do (almost?) everything to get what he wants. ^_~
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
It seems as if Seth really would do (almost?) everything to get what he wants. ^_~
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but your English is quite odd sometimes @_@
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, another chapter made of awesome and this very special tingle. :3
Liked when Seth said "Kiss me, boy.", in the stables. <3
Oh, and people might have told you so already, but you had an incorrect tag and from some point on everything's in italics.
Liked when Seth said "Kiss me, boy.", in the stables. <3
Oh, and people might have told you so already, but you had an incorrect tag and from some point on everything's in italics.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Laie,
English is my first language, and my beta's. If Seth's rhetoric bumps you, remember his birth era. What might seem unusual to you, is that I refuse to write narrative in passive voice.
KD
English is my first language, and my beta's. If Seth's rhetoric bumps you, remember his birth era. What might seem unusual to you, is that I refuse to write narrative in passive voice.
KD
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Li Nika,
Thanks! When I posted, that didn't show. Got it fixed, thanks to you!
KD
Thanks! When I posted, that didn't show. Got it fixed, thanks to you!
KD
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Seth and Isaac just keep getting better and better. Awesome update, I'm really enjoying your take on the vampire genre! Will be interested to see how they progress. :)
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is my kind of romance. Seth says all the things that Isaac and I both wanna hear. I want a Seth of my own :)
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm falling more and more for Isaac and Seth. There bond is looking like it is becoming more and more solid and soon it will become unbreakable. Isaac seems to trust Seth but he is still hesitant at time. Probably a good idea because it allows him to still be his own man and not just blindly follow. He shows that he can lead also.
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I find the riding part entirely possible (Seth is one giant of a man, right? He'd weigh a lot, and Poppy never striked me as that strong a horse, carrying two grown men easily... but then I don't know that much about horses). And as long as she was walking slowly at that point, I suppose the biting would have worked.
I DO know though that I like it a lot when Seth calls Isaac "boy" and has him follow him. XD
And I'm happy Isaac found someone who, just by being there, helps him write, as Seth obviously does.
I DO know though that I like it a lot when Seth calls Isaac "boy" and has him follow him. XD
And I'm happy Isaac found someone who, just by being there, helps him write, as Seth obviously does.
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've owned horses most of my life, grew up around them and even trained them professionally. The riding is very possible. My husband's six and a half feet tall, three hundred pounds and I'm right at six feet, about one-sixty, and we've doubled. You let the horse pick its way on inclines, because they naturally make the least work. Also, remember Poppy's untacked. That means she has her head and no girth strain.
This book is about to do a one-eighty, so hang on!
KD
This book is about to do a one-eighty, so hang on!
KD