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for Blood Lust

by KristinaDalton

schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One part of me is screaming "NO Issac, never let a vampire/stranger into your house" and the other is screaming "Of course invite him in so he can bring you pleasure you have only dreamed about"...but who knows what right...I mean it could be both in a way. Oh this is good. Is so descriptive and intriguing. I really am falling for this piece and it just started. I can't wait for your next update!
person blueberry34
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bouncebouncebounce more!!! Awesome!! Ohhhhhh, Seth sounds hot!
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Seth seems resonable.
person JayK
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm already hocked!
i really like vampire stories so i hope this becomes a long story :)
person EverMystique
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you never cease to amaze me. I don't know how you can manage to keep all these men straight. (Pun not intended, but still a stupid kind of funny.)

Interesting start.

EM
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....very interesting. Can't wait for more.
I like his eyes!
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I live in Roanoke. We don't get that much snow. But I still like the story!!
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear Brilliantbean,
My father lives in Roanoke, but I grew up in southern West Virginia. I'm older, maybe I've seen more snows... Honestly, it used to snow heavier and more often than it does now...
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I am hooked and look forward to your next update. I hope you post
it soon. I think that Isaac is in trouble with his new mysterious neighbor. As an
author, I would think poor Isaac would have read somewhere the saying that curiosity
killed the cat.
person blueberry34
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, I'm a sucker for Vamp fics, and this one is setting up to be intriguing! I'm interested to see where you'll take it! I've read some of your other stories, and have noticed that you tend to "get to the action" pretty quickly...which, actually, I find that I am enjoying! More happens! :) :)