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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This storie's great.
I'm curious... will Isaac start to really love Seth or is it going to be just lust?
More updates please?!!
I'm curious... will Isaac start to really love Seth or is it going to be just lust?
More updates please?!!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word for chapter 11: hot. You make whatever you write in whatever genres work for you. I love your story; keep writing.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm wondering what this moment of clarity is. can't wait to find out!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes! Evil cliffhanger, that! D:
Hm, okay, let me just take this moment to say that I love it when Seth calls Isaac "boy", almost as much as when Isaac can't help himself because his desire for Seth is overruling everything else.
And gotta love the beautiful dialogues!
“I apologize for my roughness. Permission to take your mare’s lunge whip to me.”
“Might give it to you. Seems you’re the dom.”
“Only when you grant it. Never by force.”
“Aren’t I fucked.”
Can' wait for more chapters.
GO SETH!
Hm, okay, let me just take this moment to say that I love it when Seth calls Isaac "boy", almost as much as when Isaac can't help himself because his desire for Seth is overruling everything else.
And gotta love the beautiful dialogues!
“I apologize for my roughness. Permission to take your mare’s lunge whip to me.”
“Might give it to you. Seems you’re the dom.”
“Only when you grant it. Never by force.”
“Aren’t I fucked.”
Can' wait for more chapters.
GO SETH!
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, but I'm also a sucker for a good vamp fic. I can wait to read more. Excellent work.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh! This is a great story!!!
Will Seth save him?? eaks I hope that vamp doesn't do anything! ><
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks alot for the great story! It's really nice! :D
Will Seth save him?? eaks I hope that vamp doesn't do anything! ><
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks alot for the great story! It's really nice! :D
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like how Isaac is actually using philosophy in trying to figure out the meaning of all of this that has happened to him and Seth being in his life. This is what separates you from other authors, you make your characters real! You give them a mind and they actually use it. I can't wait for the update this evening.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh KD!
What a cliff hanger nooooooooo!
Lovely chapter though.
I love how "Thoughtful" Seth is, but he's kinda throwing Isaac in the deep end.
Love them both though.
R xx
What a cliff hanger nooooooooo!
Lovely chapter though.
I love how "Thoughtful" Seth is, but he's kinda throwing Isaac in the deep end.
Love them both though.
R xx
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far a pretty good story. Unfortunately for me I can't help but keep thinking of Issac as some crusty old mountain guy...which kinda makes the scenes squicky...
Perhaps in the next few chapters maybe describe what Issac kinda looks like because I don't think you have.
Perhaps in the next few chapters maybe describe what Issac kinda looks like because I don't think you have.
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tatiana! You made me snort tea out my nose!!
I have to be careful how I do it or it creates a POV error. People don't go around thinking, "I ran my hand through my dark blonde hair and closed my sea green eyes."
Gawd, girl. A warning, please. 'K, put down your drink before reading.'
LOL
KD
I have to be careful how I do it or it creates a POV error. People don't go around thinking, "I ran my hand through my dark blonde hair and closed my sea green eyes."
Gawd, girl. A warning, please. 'K, put down your drink before reading.'
LOL
KD