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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best chapters yet in this story. I love that he made friends with the wolves at the end. Now he will have even more protection when Seth is asleep.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...it's really sweet. I like how you portrayed the interal struggle with Issac. And Seth is just to die for...hehe pun intended. I can't wait to read more of what happens!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a misplaced advisory for Before You.
Yet, BL will ultimately have the same issue with final chapter delivered gratis only privately.
Yet, BL will ultimately have the same issue with final chapter delivered gratis only privately.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short but veeeery nice. Also, you've had shorter. :P Can't force the muses though, they come and go as they please.
Btw, I never grow tired of seeing Isaac give in to his desires (and Seth's). <3
Btw, I never grow tired of seeing Isaac give in to his desires (and Seth's). <3
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
isaac, emotionally, seems to be all over the place. it's clear that he is used to maintaining some sense of control because he doesn't give it up to seth that easily. it makes his giving over to seth all that much better when he does it. and it's great to watch the inner conflict of isaac trying to unleash his control and let someone else take care of him. can't wait for more of it.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah that was hot.
KD I think no one can ever beat your smut writing!
I sense trouble on the horizon.
Amazing update like always!
R xx
KD I think no one can ever beat your smut writing!
I sense trouble on the horizon.
Amazing update like always!
R xx
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's funny how despite the fact that someone really wants something, they still protest too much just to give in later on. I love the wolves, but they seemed to have disappeared. Wouldnt they have come to his rescue when he got attacked rather than Seth hving to rescue him all the time - the wolves do have a 'bond' with seth dont they?
I like how the story progressing, quick but still captivating none the less.
I like how the story progressing, quick but still captivating none the less.
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... where the hell is Seth?
you are evil with your cliffhangers!
it's sweet how Seth tried to make it unnecessary for Issac to go home, but forgot about food. haha
can't wait for more!
you are evil with your cliffhangers!
it's sweet how Seth tried to make it unnecessary for Issac to go home, but forgot about food. haha
can't wait for more!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I hadn't read this before.
Awesome story, and their relationship makes me melt inside. I can't wait to read more! X3
Btw, do you notify when you update? In case you do, I'm leaving my e-mail address here: laie_himura_de_fanel@msn.om
Please keep writing! ^_^ b
Awesome story, and their relationship makes me melt inside. I can't wait to read more! X3
Btw, do you notify when you update? In case you do, I'm leaving my e-mail address here: laie_himura_de_fanel@msn.om
Please keep writing! ^_^ b
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter - yes short but no more reminders of crotchety old men...kinda...
That's my hangup and I guess I will get over it
Overall not bad...but something feels missing to the flow. I noticed it a bit more with this chapter. When I figure it out I will tell you
That's my hangup and I guess I will get over it
Overall not bad...but something feels missing to the flow. I noticed it a bit more with this chapter. When I figure it out I will tell you