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for Blood Lust

by KristinaDalton

person Doryane
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant as always!...just win you think they are getting comfortable again, boom something happens...great chapter!
person steph8503
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what going on how come its so long since the last update
person jazz
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo cool. A surprise, this is getting very interesting lol Lovers quarrels :P, cant wait to see what happens next!
person kylee
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice change of scenery. Isaac sure does change his emotions quickly. I hope Seth will be able to woo him back. He is guaranteed to never be bored.
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good grief, girl. You just LOVE to torture your characters, don't you?
person jeazard
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this, but sometimes I have trouble following Isaac's motivation. Maybe a little more details/explanations for his thoughts/actions? That's be awesome. :)
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa! so Seth went against his wishes and kidnapped him anyway?
great chapter. :D
person jeazard
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was... confusing. What DID Isaac do? oOx A little more describtion/explanation would have been great. ^^;;
person kylee
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I love this story so far. It is very well written and filled with so many beautiful images. I am confused by Chapter 21 though. I don't really understand the cause of Isaac's conflict with Seth. He realizes that Seth is a killer and so he summons another vampire to protect him? Even though Seth has given him no reason to fear for his life? Doesn't he think that Konstantin is probably just as much of a killer as Seth is? It would make more sense to me if Konstantin had come trying to steal Isaac away from Seth. And then Isaac offers himself to Konstantin so easily. I think Seth should lock Isaac away and punish him soundly for a few days.