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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story. I really like how it ended except like all good stories, I wish it didn't end. Please start another soon?
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My threesome. I finally got it... O///////O *nosebleed*
*grabs a tissue* Okay, now that I can think, I'm a little dissapointed in the "what is Izeri?" subplot. We never really found out what the other half of his bloodline was or why his glamour was effed up. *sigh* I'm going to miss that little sweetie. T__T
I can't really think of anything else. =/ Then again, I'm not that good at handing out criticism. ^w^;; I am good at being a fangirl, though. =D
Ahem~ KYAAAA~! XDD OMG That story was huge and cool and I couldn't help but love it! X3 Though, when I first started reading, I didn't see how many chapters there were until I was halfway throught the second chapter. My jaw totally hit the floor (or at least, my keyboard) when I saw it had over 70 chapters. Took me three days to get through it all, but I managed. X3 Man, this thing was epic! XD
I'm going to miss it, but that sequel you mentioned has my interest piqued. ;3 Being a poor working stiff, I can't afford books like I used to (otherwise I'd buy every single one from you,) but I'll read whatever you post here on AFF and give you the attention you deserve. ^w^ *goodbye hug*
'Til mext time! ;D
*grabs a tissue* Okay, now that I can think, I'm a little dissapointed in the "what is Izeri?" subplot. We never really found out what the other half of his bloodline was or why his glamour was effed up. *sigh* I'm going to miss that little sweetie. T__T
I can't really think of anything else. =/ Then again, I'm not that good at handing out criticism. ^w^;; I am good at being a fangirl, though. =D
Ahem~ KYAAAA~! XDD OMG That story was huge and cool and I couldn't help but love it! X3 Though, when I first started reading, I didn't see how many chapters there were until I was halfway throught the second chapter. My jaw totally hit the floor (or at least, my keyboard) when I saw it had over 70 chapters. Took me three days to get through it all, but I managed. X3 Man, this thing was epic! XD
I'm going to miss it, but that sequel you mentioned has my interest piqued. ;3 Being a poor working stiff, I can't afford books like I used to (otherwise I'd buy every single one from you,) but I'll read whatever you post here on AFF and give you the attention you deserve. ^w^ *goodbye hug*
'Til mext time! ;D
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing, simply amazing. i kinda got the hint that all three of them would end up together but i think it was more what i wanted than what your wrote! i would so buy this if it was a book!
the only scenes i think you could cut out would be the ones with Sticky and the little where-creature that ended up dropping out.
thankyou for such an amazing read
the only scenes i think you could cut out would be the ones with Sticky and the little where-creature that ended up dropping out.
thankyou for such an amazing read
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad this ended well. It was one of those fics that reading it was like reading a really good book, you dont want it to end but the end is so satisfing. i am so glad that you are going to be publishing this work. i dont like that you have to chop it down because i love it how it is, but i understand the industry. i also love the fact that you are the only author that i have encountered that updated with consistancy and didnt have week and strong days. each chapter was wonderful within itself. every other day i was waking up waiting for the next chapter to appear, thank you for all your hard work and dedication. not very many authors think about the fact that there are crazy devoted fangirls out there that live on smut like i do :)
keep up the writing!
keep up the writing!
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off--love the story. Im hoping and praying you write some sequel.
Now... on to things I think you may be able to improve.
I would have loved to find out what happened to that werewolf..Moonshine? (Im too tired to check).
Also, I would have liked to know more about Zadien. More on what drove him, and more on his background. Also It felt slightly anticlimactic in regards to his come uppance. I was prepped for this whole big thing, and it turned out to be not so big a deal. Also more on his and Akitra's background would have been nice.
Ill try and post more later. Im dead tired. Best wishes.
Now... on to things I think you may be able to improve.
I would have loved to find out what happened to that werewolf..Moonshine? (Im too tired to check).
Also, I would have liked to know more about Zadien. More on what drove him, and more on his background. Also It felt slightly anticlimactic in regards to his come uppance. I was prepped for this whole big thing, and it turned out to be not so big a deal. Also more on his and Akitra's background would have been nice.
Ill try and post more later. Im dead tired. Best wishes.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A lovely group-attack. He he he.
I think the ending works. What do bug me is that we never did find out what Izeri (do you spell his name like that?) is. I really want to know ^^
So are you going to remowe this story when you get it published? ;___; That would be so sad... T_T
I would love a sequel. Love love love! E he he he hee. Now I have to go and reread the whole thing. Laugh. A great story!
I think the ending works. What do bug me is that we never did find out what Izeri (do you spell his name like that?) is. I really want to know ^^
So are you going to remowe this story when you get it published? ;___; That would be so sad... T_T
I would love a sequel. Love love love! E he he he hee. Now I have to go and reread the whole thing. Laugh. A great story!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg I can't believe this is over. It was soo amazing, like my faveourite story. How am I going to feed my addiction now? I want this, seriously, you have to let me know where you can buy htis if and when you publish, promise? I'll leave you my e-mail address, cause it is THE most AMAZING story in the universe. You are a genius. If you write a sequel I hope its about them too, living in their manor...I'm sure you could come up with lots of twists to go with that. Omg, seriously what do I read now?! Argh!
Thank you for sharing your brilliant work and for updating so regularly, so yeah.
HUGS Aduial
Thank you for sharing your brilliant work and for updating so regularly, so yeah.
HUGS Aduial
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really great story, lots of twists and turns
good work!
good work!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm breathless! That was h o t! While I was reading this last chapter I was thinking it couldn't end any other way. I love it:) I wanted Jak happy and (smiling) boy is he ever happy! I have enjoyed your story so much!! I felt every emotion while reading it. Posting chapters like you did and knowing you were going to see this threw to the end was amazing and allowed me to throw myself into the story. I haven't left Alyrrawood University yet:) Thank you for a wonderful read ^_^
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please write a sequal, but more than one. I really want to know what's between Chiaias and that weremoose or what the professor kept tryinng to warn Jak of...and definitely what is Izeri? (and what's Izeri's reaction to Jak's new triangle?) Please write a sequal it doesn't have to be as long as this, but a couple chapters at least:)