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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 72.
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broken wings...
at first, i thought, this story was all about jak... it is...
in particularly... it's all about jak's love. Maika.
what the fuck's happened to him?
are faeries all like that?
akitra isn't... but then again, he's of a lower caste...
Maika was definitely of a higher caste...
but.... to be a bastard like that?!
I mean fuck! you loved the guy Maika! and he freaking nearly killed himself healing your wings! and you...
god... Maika.... i hope this chapter is all a lie... i hope you're not like that....
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broken wings...
at first, i thought, this story was all about jak... it is...
in particularly... it's all about jak's love. Maika.
what the fuck's happened to him?
are faeries all like that?
akitra isn't... but then again, he's of a lower caste...
Maika was definitely of a higher caste...
but.... to be a bastard like that?!
I mean fuck! you loved the guy Maika! and he freaking nearly killed himself healing your wings! and you...
god... Maika.... i hope this chapter is all a lie... i hope you're not like that....
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 73.
WHAT. THE . FUCK ?!
oooh god.... oh godohgodohgodohgoghodghd!!!
I TOLD YOU JAK! play with fire... just play with fire, then just watch as it burns your whole life to ashes... destroys everything. destroying everything you loved, you thought you loved, anything you will even come to love...
destroyed.....
now you sufffer... and akitra suffers...
and in actual fact, jak and akitra loves each other. don't they.... but now, their love, is going to never be, or be a bloody hard one....
and Maika......
whatever.
WHAT. THE . FUCK ?!
oooh god.... oh godohgodohgodohgoghodghd!!!
I TOLD YOU JAK! play with fire... just play with fire, then just watch as it burns your whole life to ashes... destroys everything. destroying everything you loved, you thought you loved, anything you will even come to love...
destroyed.....
now you sufffer... and akitra suffers...
and in actual fact, jak and akitra loves each other. don't they.... but now, their love, is going to never be, or be a bloody hard one....
and Maika......
whatever.
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 74.
so what about the soldias sidhe... why the heck did Maika have to become like that anyway... soldias sidhe or not...
and... and... Akitra... *hugs* DONT KILL YOURSELF!!!
omg... Jak.... you as good as tore akitra's heart out and threw is for the sharks to eat. (sorry charias)
*sighs*
omg... its all depressing.... *sighs* omg....
so what about the soldias sidhe... why the heck did Maika have to become like that anyway... soldias sidhe or not...
and... and... Akitra... *hugs* DONT KILL YOURSELF!!!
omg... Jak.... you as good as tore akitra's heart out and threw is for the sharks to eat. (sorry charias)
*sighs*
omg... its all depressing.... *sighs* omg....
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 37.
what?! not maika's wings?! then who'se?! definately not akitra's! right?! WHAT OTHER FAERIE IS is?!
what?! not maika's wings?! then who'se?! definately not akitra's! right?! WHAT OTHER FAERIE IS is?!
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What was that .... What was that magic?
Was it magic or was it somethign else?
WHY was Jak thinking and imagining MAIKA while rutting with fireboy???
This leaves another big.... Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ssssoooo,willjakandmaikabepairedupintheend hmmmmmmmmmmmm?
Was it magic or was it somethign else?
WHY was Jak thinking and imagining MAIKA while rutting with fireboy???
This leaves another big.... Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ssssoooo,willjakandmaikabepairedupintheend hmmmmmmmmmmmm?
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It just crossed my mind... If from what the description of a shival is clear in my head... then, Mikan's colouring is that of a shival, isn't it? Except he's not so black... Then, Izeri, would more better fit the description of a shival, since he's more black. hm....
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 22.
honestly... akitra's glamor is very very highly dangerous... it can KILL??? omg... DYING from so-called pleasure???
gosh..................... but hey. if he wants to have like normal happy sex. he can control his glamor and stuff... but... but...
what if in the heat of the moment he looses control and kills his lover... D= or maybe such things wont happen... huh. i dont know...
IZERI!!! I HOPE YOU're ALIVE!!!
BE ALIVE PLEASE!!! (but if you are the Shival like I'm thinking you are, then... heh~)
honestly... akitra's glamor is very very highly dangerous... it can KILL??? omg... DYING from so-called pleasure???
gosh..................... but hey. if he wants to have like normal happy sex. he can control his glamor and stuff... but... but...
what if in the heat of the moment he looses control and kills his lover... D= or maybe such things wont happen... huh. i dont know...
IZERI!!! I HOPE YOU're ALIVE!!!
BE ALIVE PLEASE!!! (but if you are the Shival like I'm thinking you are, then... heh~)
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 23..
i have no idea what Jak had to go through. so i have no idea, how he could be so brainless as to say those words...
i have no idea what Jak had to go through. so i have no idea, how he could be so brainless as to say those words...
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 24.
Izeri. bruise on the forehead... a few injuries... freaking hell... he is the Shival! SOMEONE EXPLAIN! how come there's a were-fey trotting around campus! especially if this half-were is the half of a SHIVAL!!! HELLO!!!??!
and mages and their grounding... gods, it sure makes them unstable beings....
Izeri. bruise on the forehead... a few injuries... freaking hell... he is the Shival! SOMEONE EXPLAIN! how come there's a were-fey trotting around campus! especially if this half-were is the half of a SHIVAL!!! HELLO!!!??!
and mages and their grounding... gods, it sure makes them unstable beings....
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 25.
whats a sash'len ni omba shark? why would it put you in coma for six freaking months? charias saved izeri *A* hehehehehe~ yay~
and what the freaking hell is going on with jak? is the need to be grounded really that bad. how many more awful secrets do these mages have? gosh.... wow~
this who plot and idea is absolutely fascinating. kudos kudos kudos! ^_^
whats a sash'len ni omba shark? why would it put you in coma for six freaking months? charias saved izeri *A* hehehehehe~ yay~
and what the freaking hell is going on with jak? is the need to be grounded really that bad. how many more awful secrets do these mages have? gosh.... wow~
this who plot and idea is absolutely fascinating. kudos kudos kudos! ^_^