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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 58.
slut. jak's a slut. aaargh.... damn you jak... fucking with maika and akitra not enough?!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 64.

O_O that was one long smut fest...
one DAAAAAAAAAAAMMNNN LOOOOOOONNG smut fest...
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 64.

O_O that was one long smut fest...
one DAAAAAAAAAAAMMNNN LOOOOOOONNG smut fest...

but the ending was so.... abrupt? im reeling.... what happened... they both are ubber pissed at each other... and both are prolly crying..

what's so bad about kissing a faeries wings? i think there's something taboo there.... or , maybe, they're just extremely sensitive...
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 65.

that's a turn of events.... O_O
so now... what happend to my theory that Izeri is the shival?
you can't be two were's at the same time... Izeri's now a shark?
and Charias... well. seems like Izeri's not so scared of him anymore.
so that gives more chance for their relationship ^_^
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 66....

I knew it..... schematizing scheming bastard. BASTARD!!! Bloody FIRE mage! fire damnit fire!
of all the elements of mages. Fire is most definitely the most dangerous!
did'nt i tell you Jak.! don't play with fire! You'll get burnt! and that's if you're lucky!
now you're whole entire universe is goonnna be BURNT TO ASHES!

AAAAAAAAAARRRGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you damn EARTH MAGE! you're freaking EARTH! do something! smother the fire! cover him! suffocate him in a ball of hard baked clay! burry him 10000 feet beneath the ocean level1!!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 67

they met.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.. chap 68...

omg... *hugs katica* thank god for friendship and truce.

that was a huge huge relief... *sighs* omg... i think my heart is finally going back to normal now.... *sighs*
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 69.

hahaha XD I know that game!

Liar. thou over here we call it "Bluff" XD

and seems like things are warming up between Charias and Izeri =D yay~
but well. we'll see tonight. If Izeri is indded a were-shark... or... a Shival...

anyway. how's Akitra. I can't help but feel sorry for him...
Has Maika been ignoring him too?
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 70.

snowing... i thought Izeri would come to his mind first. but it didnt... *shrugs*
but for the little fey to be that upset... why was he upset?
because he was not were shark? because he was actually shival? because... because...? i dont know.
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chap 71...

IM SORRY WHAT?! who said that?! Jak or akitra?!
if jak said it, i can udnerstand..... but.... BRAEJGBRNW<>QRNB!#JK@$?R??????

JAK! you can't die now!!! what about izeri?!?!?! you idiot!!! you can't die!!!!
Maika just got his wings back! WHERE ARE YOU GOING?!??!?!