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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Avernion
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! Akitra is one mean bugger. I still haven't really been able to form pairs. I think it would be so nice if he ended up with sharky. But right now, he seems to only think about all the things he shouldn't be thinking of doing to his little roomie. What will happen next, I wonder.
person Colandra
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing such an awesome story! Are you ending it at 50,000? I hope not because there still so much unexplained!
person Avernion
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh. It's so nice with quick releases :)

A moment there you hade me thinking Akitra liked it. Bot no, sadly no. Poor Jak for being so useless. I am very curious on what will happen next :D
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pooh, he's still alive. Ahh, well. Poor Izeri with his roommate, lol. Although I still like the wereshark anyway. Hope that bastard faerie doesn't hurt Jak too bad.
person cfweber1b
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jak- the only good thing is he and Izeri arent goingto be expelled- but to have to deal with Akitra yuck. Professor Dark seemed awfully at ease about the two different horses a vampires and a shiva- hmmm. More please.
person Avernion
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. I can't wait for the rest. It is so very smart :) Laugh. And hot.
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please just let the Shival finish that damn sidhe! what a bastard! it would serve him right...
person js
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! What happens next?
person DJfrdrck
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love It! This is like the best story I have ever
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 20

What's the mortality rate at this school, exactly?

Shouldn't be too bad, since parents still send their offspring there to study :)
Jak should of wrapped his fist in scarf and punched Akitra in a face. Good ol Muggle fighting, hehe!