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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Cindyip
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, Jak what are you going to do now? Its time to grow-up:)
person Lindsey
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to tell you how much I love, love, love this story!
It's amazing.
The character are unbelievable.
The plot is sick. (in a good, good way of course)
The smuts also amazing.

Can't wait to read more!!
person aoe
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think my favorite relationship dynamic in the story so far is between jak and charias, prolly because i have a soft spot for the misunderstood (possibly??) characters. i'm not sure if that's the direction you're taking the story, but i am looking forward to more of my favorite sharkboy. :) and also behind the mystery of the wings and this "tagging."
person Avernion
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had a bad feeling it wasn't Maika's wings. I still have a bad feeling. Who wouldn't ^^ But I don't know what to think.

Thanks for the chapter. I do so love these fast updates of your's ^-^
person Cindyip
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, now I am really curious to what's going on? Who 'tagged' Jak? (^_^)
person xRishax
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pwease post the next two to five or maybe TEN chapterS so i can be happy for the holidays!!!!
person xRishax
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please PLEASE put the next chapter up *puppy dog eyes*!!!!
person Cindyip
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please more soon, its so addictive:)
person Cj
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FREAKIN AMAZING CHAPTER!!! OMG I LOVED IT...is he really that mythological creature jak spoke about earlier?... and i don't think C is that bad...anywho that has truely made my day wonderful!
person Hello
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'd like to say that this story's great! Please update another part soon.