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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Luiny
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story :D I wish so much that Akitra is the one who gave Jak his wings <3 I just love that arrogant bastard so much!
person Cindyip
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Smexy, but I don't know Aki is so much better at faerie bargaining than Jak, I hate to see what loophole he find:)
person Avernion
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha. The beginning of this chapter was actually pretty spooky ^^;
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story is soooooooooooo good. thank you for sharing
person Avernion
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My heart breaks for Maika. It's just too sad :'(
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
he should watch out - one of the books might bite him :P Still liking this story. Will you do more with shark boy? I really like him for some reason >>
person Cindyip
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so Jak going to find asnwers, or is something dark and spooky waiting for him:)
person Lindsey
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This made me want to cry.
I love this story, can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
person Avernion
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So heartbreaking sad. Splits the heart. I hope and wish Maika will get healed in every way. It's so sad to see a person that broken. Or... Read about...

You have great writing skills. Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so hooked on this story. i was wondering where you were going with the loose ends w/ a bunch of these relationships, but it's turned into such a dramatic, addictive saga! i look forward to reading a chapter every two days. :D