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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can´t wait for another chapter. Akitra + Jak *muhahaha* Just what will Maika say.
person Cindyip
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Jak just when you thought you were getting good at bargaining:)
person Cindyip
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Maika what are you now for Jak, lover, fuck buddy, or something else?(^_^)
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 43
So, Jak is caught in between two dancing faeries? Good god! At least he got some from both. Why do I feel that this is going to blow spectacularly into faeries' faces? They should feel guilty for using a decent guy to manipulate each other :)
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hn...Akitra probably might be better for Jak than Maika
person xRishax
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
person Cindyip
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, faerie drama is so smexy:)
person Cindyip
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Makie, won't you ever let someone in, please?(^_^)
person js
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story...writing is always a struggle for me, so I admire your ability to put words to paper, so to speak. :)
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, i am looking forward for more to come