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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Cindyip
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Maika is so strange as the chivalous type...I look forward to seeing more of that:)
person kiraru
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh,wow...my skin is tingling,great update!I think it's time for Akitra to move on and let Jak and Maika alone.He needs someone like....Izeri.a friend for a friend *evil twisted grin*
person xRishax
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I wonder what Maika's going to do next and what did he mean when he said that Jak was his? I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens!!!!!! Please Post!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person k
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg now i'm worried now! jak don't be crazy!
person Cindyip
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jak, how you have learn to listen to your inner mage:)
person Suryallee
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!
I soo love it, the interactions are priceless and the charas are wonderfully written out.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please mooooore
person Emeraldawn
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is hands down one of the best stories I have ben reading in a while - I just found it and I am loving it. You right out one hell of a story - cant wait for more
person kiraru
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woaaaaaaaa....Jak's statement at the end...priceless.Zaiden...no comment
thanks for the update,waiting for the next one.
person xRishax
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!