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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person xRishax
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeah...it looks like things are kinda looking up for Jak now, but it confuses me...why does Jak keep switching between Maika and Akitra with his feelings? Well, anyways this was another awesome chapter...yeah you =]
person xRishax
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HaHaHaHa...I hope Jak DOESN'T castrate himself...it would be a sad time for everybody....hahaha. Please update daily for all of your beautiful fans...especially me =]
person Avernion
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Broken Wings, how I love you.

Poor Jak. Things just never seem to go well for him.
person Cindyip
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jak that is a bit extreme, besides we like you falling for the wrong boys:)
person lilclily
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. i read this in one sitting (all 51 chappies) and man, i've got it bad for this story. keep it up! i feel bad for both Akitra and Maika...i want them to end up together. or end up in a very unlikely three-way love relationship with Jak. or even Jak could find someone else....perhaps the mysterious vampire/earthling buddy who has yet to make a reappearance? suspense and speculations galore!
person Cindyip
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AkitraMaikaJak love triangle is so smexy:)
person Avernion
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Things have become so complex. This can't end well...
person kiraru
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow,really nice update. I've loved it,thanks!
I feel sorry for Akitra as well,maybe..no,for sure,I'm an idiot too.
person js
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that last speech by Maika.
person Avernion
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That's all I can say. Wow.