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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden what is your game, how dare you screw with Jak like that...or is he?
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I can't wait to see who Jak ends up with:)
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I reviewed, and for that I apoloigize. :]
Things are really getting intense!
Jak is under tons of stress, and I feel horrible for Maika.
Akitra is an asshole and now I find myself not liking him very much. Haha.
I adore Maika and Jak, so hopefully you make them happy eventually.
You're writing's amazing.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Things are really getting intense!
Jak is under tons of stress, and I feel horrible for Maika.
Akitra is an asshole and now I find myself not liking him very much. Haha.
I adore Maika and Jak, so hopefully you make them happy eventually.
You're writing's amazing.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Maika. And its not overemotional; people who've gone through a great trauma will exhibit mood swings, depression, suicidal thoughts, etc. He's just going through a bad case of post traumatic stress disorder. Let's hope that Jak can help him.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So that's how Maika lost his wings, poor guy:(
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so gooooood!
And maybe I'm strange but I want Maika and Akitra together, and Jak should be with Charias, they'll be a hot couple!
And maybe I'm strange but I want Maika and Akitra together, and Jak should be with Charias, they'll be a hot couple!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great update.Thanks! It seems a threesome is coming....*arched brow*
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
But but.. what about Akitra?!? :'( snif. He's so alone now and nobody wants him. Can't they be all together? x)
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it! I was on the edge of my seat hoping it it would work out. great chapter.