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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Jetfire
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm seriously wonder who's nice nad who isn't cept Jak cause he's def nice but....I really hope this story will have a happy ending...is it going to have a happy ending? It'd be real nice if you could say that cause otherwise I might have to stop reading.

Anway it was another great chapter.

Hugs Aduial
person Hello
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really don't have a good vibe about Zaiden. Gah!
person Avernion
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Jak, good. Don't believe a lie that he says!

Oki, so Zaiden isn't on the top of my list. Of all the characters, he might be the scariest one.
person Avernion
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I’m little annoyed with Jak. It’s so obviously obvious the Zaiden-ass is lying. Haven’t he learned anything??? o_O I hope he won’t do anything bad to Akitra. They’re finally starting to become friends T_T
person Cindyip
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Jak the big night is finally coming...do you really think Zaiden is telling you the whole truth? He has lied before.(^_~)
person Jetfire
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. Its like a book, amazing the way you're spinning the threat so you dont know who to like or not (cept Jak cause you can't help but like him). And I had 57 chapters too, this is going on my faveourites list. I love it.

Hugs Aduial
person Avernion
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sharky. I didn't expect him to be drawing Izeri. Poor guy. What a horrible way to get caught about your feelings. The poor mortifying dude.
person Cindyip
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Izeri, I hope his world can be right side up again:)
person aoe
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
<3333 CHARIAS. i have found my favorite in your story. i'm only a bit sad, because if the sketch in the artbook is of who charias really wants, then i can't really see it as jak?? i think you have me pining for a pairing that won't happen, lol! i really like this new aff.net main page update thing--i wouldn't have thought to check for your update until tomorrow at the latest!
person Avernion
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden, Zaiden, Zaiden. What should I make of you?