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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Jetfire
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is a bit mean on Akitra (man i hope i spelled that right) but he did deserve to have someone pull one over on him. Well I can't wait to see what happens next,cause frankly this is very exciting and I just love the fact that you update so regularly.

Huggins Aduial
person Jenna T.
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I've been reading this story for a while now and all I have to say is that it is pretty damn great. I don't mind the direction it is going in at all. Probably because I don't really see a definite, obvious direction that looks set in stone. Maybe that's just me, but that's what it looks like. This story isn't a traditional fantasy slash story so it could really go in any direction you want it to go. That being said, keep up the great work!
person Cindyip
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, you got your answer...I was wondering will there ever be a MaikaAkiJak threesome, I personally would love to see that:)
person Avernion
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh. What will Jak dooo???

I have forgiven Jak. I imagined something way more horrible. In my eye's, Jak is still good. Phew. Akitra will probably still be pissed, but Jak is good. Laugh. Kind of. I just feel so relieved ^^
person Raen
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't really like the direction this is going in, so I probably won't keep reading... but I really did enjoy the story up till this point. But I can only think this is going to end horribly and I just don't think I can stand to read that :\ Great job though! Really.
person Cindyip
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jak, what are you going to do? :)
person Jetfire
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! I'm glad its gonna have a happy ending! Cause its such a brilliant story and i would have hated to stop reading it. I just love the way everytime you read a chapter you just want to read more and more. If this was a book, I would sooo buy it. cause its amazing.

Hugs Aduial
person Avernion
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I have such a bad bad bad feeling about this. jak did something stupid just now, didn't he X'(
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden is facile liar.
person Cindyip
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew that Zaiden is liar, I just wonder how much of one:)