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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Avernion
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder. Will Akirta thank him? Or kill him?
person Cindyip
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yummy, but I wonder what happens if Akitra tops instead:P
person Jetfire
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I reviewed the last chapter...*shame on me*. Anyway I love the smut, cause its very good smut. I can't believe i'll miss the next couple of chapters cause I'm off on holiday...I'm gonna cry. Anyway I love your story so don't think I don't appreciate it anymore. Anyway so I'll get loads of chapters when I get back. Yipee. Jak is so sweet and I'm really starting to like Akitra too...i mean i liked him even when he was a bastard so. Yeah good job.

Hugs Aduial
person Avernion
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so weird, but I actually find this so incredibly sweet. Jak was so kind and gentle. Sure he talked dirty, but in a sweet way. I didn't think that was possible. Clearly I was wrong

I find bondage and dirty sex talk sweet… How did this happen..?
Ah! I know. E he he he he…

:D
person crazykitty
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...so hot *blush*
person Cindyip
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to the dark side, Jake:)
person Avernion
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. This never ending dance.

It was a sweet chapter :)
person Jetfire
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're sooo mean with your cliffy's has anyone ever told you that...however since you are the most amazing updater (however you manage to do it so often is a mystery to me). I shan't complain too much. I really love Jak, he's soo cool. And I love your writing style, its just pulls you in completely.

Hugs Aduial
person Cindyip
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Akitra even as a uke is so dominant:)
person Pease
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Raen. Ooo, I don't like the directing of where this story is going!!! I love it to def, but I'll just glace at the reviews for now to see if and when it gets better! Excellent story! Keep up the great work.

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