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There's possibly only one other story that I've read that could compare to this epic monster of a book. Possibly the most well written piece of fiction I have read in a long while and I'm almost sad it's over. Was happy that all three finally got over each other and just got on with it, was almost touching. Anyways very good stuff, extremely enjoyable to read and I hope that publishing works out for you.

Blackrain7557

I still can't get this story out of my head....

chap 75.

what the heck is wrong with jak and akitra...
i am so baffled by their bahaviour...
i dont know what they want to do with each other...
it's like they're playing kiss and kick. one step forward, two steps back.

and i was so. so. sooooo hoping there was more to that contract than it seemed... damn...

chap 76.

*Sighs* and so... now i have to worry about jak loosing control and letting his soul rip again.
and can't we have a jak-faerie sandwich? wouldn't that make us all so happy?

and.. i hope its not too much to ask for... but a smutty scene between the two sharks would be lovely~

chap 77..

*sniffs* JAK!!!! *hugs jak* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! *wails*

chap 78...

now what?... akitra has chosen Jak.

Maika knows that Akitra wants Jak.
Maika knows that Jak still wants him.

What does Jak want?

And what will the person left out, get, in the end?

FINAL CHAP 79
.................

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
KATIIIIIIIIIIIICAAAAA~!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!!

ok...

ok....

... hold on... *takes a deep breath*.... ok *gasps* I'm trying to control myself here.... but my lungs just wont cooperate with my heart.
*another breath*

phew.... ok.... I think I'm okay now... *urp* bleaaah. that's what you get for swallowing too much air.

gah... ok... where'd my brain go? aaaaaaaaahhh *snatches brain* ah there you are... ok.....

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!

^_________________________________________________^ ~!!!!!

The ending was HUGE! great! omg! rather predictable (as in, when both Maika and Akitra were in the room with Jak. Immediately. I knew there would be a treesome , and Jak would be geeting fed with two ridged rods, on the lower end of his body.
bweeehehehehehehehehehheheh *cover-slaps mouth* ah. my head is reeeeling...

gosh... it's finally ended...
you can just say its FREAKING 80 CHAPTERS LONG!!! 79, actually, but heck...

and you know, somehow, IM STILL NOT SATISFIED!!!

because... somehow... this all feels like... it can just be book ONE of am awesome series...


Say what... I'll email ya.
Because I have alot to answer to those 3 questions you have.


oh... and... *ahem* its really late to say this but...

IM SORRY! *bows down* I tend to thon a great story when i get one. and I've been mindlessly spamming you with reviews (Thou not for every chapter. which I'm guilty for... how many reviews do I owe you? I'll come back and give them to you. )

I hope you didn't mind my prattling. and my nonsensicle guesses at Izeri being a Shival... *rolls eyes at self*
but other than that... my guesses were good eh? *self satisfied smirk* hehehhehehe *gets a brick thrown at her* gah.

okay.... hehe ^_^

look forward to my email! XD (or be prepared for it with dread) XP


Love ya lots for cooking up this great great read! *hugs* whooooooootts!!!

Oh btw, i found you through "madrachadevvi" you're on her recommended reading list ;) feel honoured! I'm glad I found you! and your story! yay!

okay~ bug ya later ;)


- nekoii

chap 44
So... Maikah's good enough to have sex after just being discharged, and after attempting to kill himself not even a week ago.
Guess means he still very much wants to live... and hey, he's got a lowly mage loving him too. good kicks eh.

as for akitra.... that guy...
and what zaiden has plans for.... and jak... and... i ... dont... know

chap 45
and moonsinger.... is shadorak gonna do anything about his little puppy?
why dropped out? why?
you wont mention it unless its important.

chap 46
aw... charias has a girl in mind?
aw... i was hoping he'd go after a guy... a, certain, guy...