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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Hello
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! AHH! That's all I can think. Please update another chapter please. :)
person Avernion
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm surpriced Zaiden told Jak as much as he did. Maybe he wanted Jak to cruble from the knowledge. A little mental torture.

Zaiden is an ass. A big burning ass.
person scorpio
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden needs to be taken down!
person Cindyip
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jak, poor poor guy...life is just a mess for him:(
person GellyBelly
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON! I'M DESPERATE!!
person Avernion
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did so not see that one coming. How will they handel this X/
person Cindyip
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Jak isn't the only one with a messed up lovelife:)
person lijana
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered this fic and I have spent a large unknown amount of time reading it up to ch64 ^^
I am loving the characters! I cant remember the summary but I guess now that this is a threesome LOL
I love your universe and the abilities of all the magical people/

Your characters are well developed and my faves are Akitra, Maika and Charias! Jak is a little whiny but I do like him as well.

I look forward tot he next few chapters and what happens to Charias and Izeri. Thanks for sharing your fic.
person Avernion
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Playing with fire, huh.

The blood really worries me...
person Cindyip
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Akitra, what is your game? What are you really up to?(^_^)