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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the game is no called lier, its called bull for the kids and bullshit for teens an up
person Cindyip
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind the timeslip, it still flows well with the rest of the story. I am eager to see if Izeri really does become a wereshark. Poor Chaias, Jak why can't you believe it was a accident? ^_~
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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person Avernion
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You go Jak. Those wings are yours!

I wonder if what Zaiden needs Jak for has anything to do with Akitra..?
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden must die. Let Akitra do it, and make it long and horribly painful.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Zaiden is really bastard
person Cindyip
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Zaiden's great-great is that 'guy,' huh? Explains alot:)
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, clift hanger!!! i am looking forward to see what happen next
person Avernion
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun duuun. The moment of doom and death!

It would be so nice if the grown ups could just bite their tongues and point their anger at Zaiden instead :D
person Cindyip
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Jak, already I wish he talk to Professor Dark, I want to know does Zaiden have something personally against him:)