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Akitra, what are you sorry for? And how did you get in, in the first place:)

I can completely understand and sympathize why Jak did that. We would do anything for those we love, wouldn't we? Hope he survives this. Glad Maika has his wings back.

Holy shit, please update another chapter please. Woah...just woah.

I owe this story a million reviews, it's so amazing. After so many turns, spins and surprises you've weaved onto the plot (a real rollercoaster of emotions, sprinkled with high quality fantasy and magic ^-^), I never expected Jak's unrequited love for Maika to be fulfilled in such a way, in such a time. Oh well, Jak definitely had to heal Maika's wings somehow but I really thought Maika would never love him back, even after the healing. He seemed too broken to me, and later too dependant on his medication to develop a healthy relationship with Jak. Now I have to eat my words!.

Akitra is my totally my favorite character (I have a weird soft spot for Charias, too), and I was so rooting for Jak/Akitra until their disastrous night together but now, nothing would make me more happy than an OT3 with Jak, Akitra and Maika. That, if Jak's survives xDDDD. I can't wait for ch 72!!!!

That was WoW! I'm taking deep breaths to reel it back in wow! I loved it! I like Jak and Maika together. Maika had came along way. I was wondering did he freak out about being healed because now he can't love Jak anymore?(being human and all) I can't wait to see what you have in store next time ^_^

wonderful story

A cute sad chapter. I liked it a lot. But then again, I always do ^^

Wow, so Maika is over getting his wings back or is that just the meds talking:)

This story has me hook line and sinker! I love it!! I didn't see Zaiden true colors either?! I thought at the party when he wanted to do Jak before going to check on Izeri wasn't right. Then when he wanted to do it in the bathroom knowing what could happen I was thinking Jak should know better. But still I didn't see him being a master mind like he turned out to be. I can visualize all the sexy eye candie:) I really enjoy Jak and his needs! WoW!! That has kept it hot for me:) Could this become an anime?!? I would watch it and buy the DVD set to:) Just wanted to let you know I really love this story! It took me a couple of days to catch up to here and I loved ever minute of it! I'll be here till the end. ^_^

Go fish must be the most boring game in existence. Laugh. They did seem to have fun though. :3

Jak is so confusing. Does he have feelings for Maika or Akitra, both of them or in fact none of them XS I just don’t know...

And I think the beginning works. ^^