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I didn't see that comming! Maika really has done a 180. He's so full of himself. Wow I love it! You have ran though all my emotions with this story:) Now I'm feeling so sad for Maika and I should be feeling that for Jaks. But Maika was kind when he was a child and all this stuff keeps happening to him good and bad and he doesn't know how to cope with any of it. He has dug such a deep hole for himself. I can feel his pain so to speak:) He and Jaks are still my favorite couple even if one is acting like a faerie jerk ^_^

Awww...I feel so sorry for Jak all that trouble just to have Maika turn into another version of Akitra. I feel so sad :'( Please update soon!!!!!!!!!

I must say, this chapter suprised the hell out of me!
I definetly enjoyed this chapter, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
:] Good job!

OMG Where has this story been all my life??? *starry-eyed* I can't believe how massive it is, and it's taken me three days to catch up, but now I am and all I can say is "WOW!" XDDD I love it all! The treachery, the heartache, the love! OMG To see the characters grow from how they were back then to become who they are now, it's so amazing! XD

But what's happened to Izeri? @_@ Eeek! What's going to happen to Jak? DX I know you promised a happy ending but I can't help but wonder, just like how I used to wonder "what the fuck is Zaiden's game?" X3 Needless to say, I'm going to be staying tuned. ;3 Somehow, I see a threesome in the future. Maybe I'm wrong, but at least it'll give me nice fantasies until the story's end. X3

Can I hug you? No? I thought not. X3

i've been reading this story since chapter one and i LOVE it. the way you detail your characters and story line is amazing. anf the twists! in the beginning i so though that Jak would have something with Charis and that Maika and Akitra would be together and all that. the drama reminds me kinda like real life but with a soap opera twist ya kno? keep up the excellent work...i check like everyday for updates....

DUDE! WHAT HAPPENED TO JAK? IS HE GOING TO BE ALRIGHT?
WHAT DID THAT LUST FAIRY DID TO HIM?
THIS ARE THE QUESTIONS I NEED TO KNOW MAN!
PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU MAN!

So Jak managed to cure Maika. I just hope he won´t have to pay too much.
pls MORE -^_^-

Noooo....what kind of a chapter is that to come home to?! Seriously! Ah but you did promise a happy end...but you still deserve a smack for leaving it there. I really really can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh good the agony of having to wait.

Sooo awesome.

Hugs Aduial

It began so great. Everything was so perfect that I sat with a smug happy face, knowing everything was wonderful and great. Then the pink bubble burst.

I really, really wanted Maika to get his wings back, but not on the cost of Jak's soul. And how will all this make Maika feel? I think I'll go away and cry now :'(

I love this story. I love the way you write. I love your quick updates ;P When this story is done, I hope you write another huge one ^^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Jak is not going die! Definitely not going to die!