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Oh I am enjoying this fic so much.

Charias and Izeri are a breath of freshness with their sweet love.

Jak/Maika/Akitra though have a long way to go to clear up all the misunderstandings. I hope for a happy ending still though. I hope now that Jak fids love for himself after tasting a hint of it before. I guess I have to say poor Maika hearing that his 'love' was just under a lovespell perpertrated by his other 'love'. So confusing, yet interesting.
I look forward to the next chapter and I am glad that the last couple of chapters were a bit longer than usual.

Oh oh oh :DDD I so love the thought of Akitra/Jak.. and a happy ending for them ;) Maika can run with his new "friends" xD

Jak is my hero

So, if Akitra could choose between Jak and Maika, he would still pick Maika, right. Jak is still just a human after all. Or was he just so angry because he thought Jak lied to him? Or did he get second thoughts from hearing that? If he liked Jak because he couldn't have Maika, would he shift back to liking Maika when he knew the other fairy had had feelings for him? He did ask Maika to dance with him after all. Doesn't anyone ever pick Jak first? ;_; Will Jak ever be happy? T_T

Ha ha haaaa~! In your face Zaiden! XDDD *does a victory dance*

As for Jak's wings, I'm a little surprised that it was Akitra's idea. Not surprising was the sidhe's anger at what he perceived to be a lie. Wonder how he's going to get close enough to see the truth for himself? X3

Thanks for the fantasy fodder. ^//////^ Still not getting my hopes up, though. X3 *waits for the next update*

*sigh* I wish there was a way for JakMiakaAkitra to be together and happy:)

Hey!! Loved it!!! Zaiden got a few good punchs to the gut:) Thanks to Jak. I'm wondering what are the true feeling Maika and Akitra have for each other now?! How or will Jak come into play when the feeling are all out in the open? I'm sorry I just can't help but like Jaks and Maika together:) I understand Maika and Akitra have known each other longer and that Akitra was willing to do anything for Maika. I'm enjoying your story so much! The updates are like a dream come true:) I guess you're thinking what kind of dreams does this chick have?!(smile) See you next time ^_^

great chapter. I hope that Jak overcome sore from loss the love and fall in love with Akitra
and Akitra will deeply love Jak and Zaiden with Maika will envy them.

Awwww, that's soo mean. Are you done abusing them yet? Poor Akitra...poor Jak. I don't know what to say, cept it made me cry and that's mean and I wanna know what happens next.

Hugs Aduial

Laugh. Aren't you just the evil one. At least the chapter helped. It helped in a very smal, smal sort of way... I hope Akitra won't give up on him, but will try some more. I hope Jak can forgive him and believe him. I long for my happy ending ;P I don't really want it to be over, but I want it to be happy =^-^=

But I don't remember the ring thing. I thought that if you wanted to dance with someone who didn't have wings of his own, you gave him wings in his own colour. If you gave him wings in your own colour, you made the other one your bitch. But this was a ring, in Akitra's colour. Is it something like the piercing Maika had in his navel?
And he threw it into the sea T________T I hope a friendly shark picks it up for him. Akitra must have felt so broken ;__;
Into the sea... *sobbs*