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for Broken Wings

by KaticaLocke

person Anon
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks you for the Charais/Izeri romance, those two are just too cute. I really like that surly wereshark. Izeri shoudl lighten him up a bit.XD
person Avernion
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can see loneliness or a threesome grinning back at me...
person Jetfire
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This doesn't seem to be coming to a happy end for Jak. If there is no happy end for Jak I will smack you virtually. The poor boy, I mean he doesn't deserve it. Well we'll see. Poor poor Jak.

schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What? Just few chapters? And what about Jak? Will he be alone? *cry*
person Cindyip
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, Jak it does mean something. Please don't give it up:)
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I readchaps 1-76 in one sitting. Took me about three hours.
Im addicted to this story. And if you dont give Jak a happy ending in this story could you possibly write a sequel?
person Avernion
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo, will Akitra and Maika end up together? What will happen to Jak and will his plan really work? Hmmm...
person Kuromei
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for friendly, if reluctant, sharks. I think another reviewer said something about that. X3

I wonder what's going to happen once (or if) Charias gets the ring back, though. My original threesome idea is starting to come back, but I'm trying to shut the door in its face until closer to the end. Again, I can't get my hopes up, not if I want my heart broken again. X3 *waits for the next update*
person Cindyip
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Ri-chiva," Izeri said, waggling one finger back and forth in front of Ri-chiva's face to distract him while the other gently set the little sailor hat in place. "It means 'Dragon King' in the old language. I usually just call him Ri."

-I think you meant Maika, not Izeri.

But I love the story, Chi is so cute now:)
person roro237
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! You alway have a surprise in every chapter:) Get the ring back?! I can't wait to see how Jak will work this plan out! ^_^